KelvinSekwati
"You can do that?" Reed looked at Peter with a flabbergasted expression.
Everyone looked at her with varying expressions on their faces. Hypnos was still nonchalant, still smiling. Nian Zhen, however, was conscious of Castor besides him. Castor had stiffened at his mother's words. His eyes immediately flying to Nian Zhen, who met his gaze clearly yet with a spark of something like a silent plea in it. Perhaps it was due to his upbringing or to something else he saw in the man staring right back at him that inescapably moved him but Castor took a single step forward which brought him closer to Nian Zhen's side. Nian Zhen gripped his sword hard until his hand almost bled, too moved by his son's silent support to speak.
Albusflores closed his eyes shut this time and thanks to that, he didn't throw up when they stepped out. He made deep breaths and calmed his senses while August was tapping something on a small tablet in his hand.
"Spiritual Essence? I have heard of something like it from the nomadic elves once before..." Zaro looked towards the barren ground as he thought back.
"Shall we?" Loki was the first to say as he jumped over what was left of the crumbled wall.
"Who are you...?" I ask the man with red hair in front of me. "The name is Haritail, nice to meet you." He says with a smile. "THE ICE IS COMING OUR WAY!!!" Jacob screams out. "Blast!" I sense a huge wave of chi that destroys the huge icicle into small pieces of ice.
Then, time passed as the Jonins came to pick up their students. Hinata bid me farewell as she left with Kurenai. Eventually, the room was left with Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, and me. Huh? It couldn't be... could it be the butterfly effect and that I would end up in Kakashi's team?! But I thought there would only be three in each team? However, I secretly couldn't help but excited.
"No wonder you were so confident, you're quite strong!"
Lifted his hands and then joined his palms together'' Release''
I just started this because the idea intrigued me of a "system" of law. However, I just got to ch. 21 and so far am NOT going to continue it. There was some hope for the plot with a MC who wants to live with no regrets and tries not to be a simp, but ultimately is one. The hopefully not, FL, is abusive and stupid mixed with some ignorance. Though some might say she is naive or innocent that is still no excuse to rush into things when you've gone to school fornit. Maybe this is some comedic trope, but it lands on the 80s/90s comedic styling of some anime where the FL BASHES the ML and the audience is supposed to laugh at the slapstick humor borderline abuse. As it goes the author seems to have taken an interesting idea and has filled it with common mundane tropes.
Great start. Good pace. Nice story development as of now. All the best author.
At chapter 64 and so far it is pretty good, interesting plot
