Petition to bring back World's Best Martial Artist.......How could they drop a novel that is on par with Lord of The Mysteries, but in another genre... why did author have to set such a lame title, lame novel description and somewhat lame beginning chapters.... because of that people didn't try it. This novel is not a modern world garbage. If you haven't checked it yet, read till at least chapter 200, you'll understand why it is such a great novel that can contest for top1 novel of 2020. I don't even want to read mtl, half of its charm would go away...
all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.all the characters in this fan fiction are just garbage. every woman is just a sh***. the only normal character is mc's father.
For people who come here just as a warning don't come here expecting things to what is depicted in H E N T A I all I can say is have an open mind and read the story. Though the MC is a little pathetic at first he will change bcuz there is something called character growth. Just let the author write his story and just read it before passing judgment.
Pity it has been completed, as I believe that this work could have gone for far more chapters. With the story that the author provided this book got quite a big potential.
Sounds a lot like the game left for dead.Good story writing.Zombies coming up sounds like a spitter or a snatcher. Love the special notes and comments at the end of chapers as well.
unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel.a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those.i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me.it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general.lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it.tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.
Please make available with audio
very good book. just too long.
it's good. i like it.
Six chapters are better than four. So what’s the hold up?
great book but he is a scumbag in his treatment of Lady Dorothy. Why do you all write that everyone can see the value of a live in son in law except his family? Lady Dorothy loves her husband and he should be faithful. That trashy singer should be allowed to sleep with him.
i really like the charactet of xyla quest,this is thr kind of female lead that i want.