Read till chapter 22. Overall a very good novel.
The only problem I have with this novel is that the story until now occurs in 3 or 4 days since Mc's Transmigration.
I am not saying that plot progression is slow but it just doesn't feel believable for this much plot progression occurs in first four days.
Try doing short time skips (days to weeks but not years). By that I mean, make Mc's Age progression along with plot progression. Spread out plot progression along Mc's schooling & ***** years instead of compacting it by doing plot progression Day by Day. You will be burnt out to write content very quickly.
But this is Author's novel. He can do whatever he wants with his novel.
Review the book: Weak to Strong: The Hybrid by Khawla_Amini,
It is quite a literary daring, to amazement, read:
Finally a Werewolves master class.
First lesson...
To differentiate the hierarchies between wolves
to. Lycanthrope Wolf. (turns a human into a wolf)
b. Common wolf.
Second lesson ... What weapons do wolves have?
In the case of a Lycanthrope wolf. (his saliva is poison)
A weapon against whom? against Vampires.
Third lesson ...
Fall in love at 16, and for eternity and with a single partner.
So you must:
1. Mentally accept.
2. Mark your partner.
3. Seal the Bond
And the information continues: vampires, hybrids ... etc.
All this before reading the chair of Werewolves.
It is time to ask the question, where was that alpha male?
It stayed that we need to update ...
That is why I invite you to read and learn at another level of reading and writing.
Level infinity
Idiocity infinity
Mental problem infinity
Weak ass crying bitch infinity
If you looking for a interesting story dont look here, this is worse than those virgin mcs in harem. You know hes the most powerfull beying in the universe but foer some reason hes weak as ****,dumb and such.
I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.
What a nice novel you've got. I have read it and I can only say that you've planned it well. The vocabulary of words was verily shown to the readers. The fact that he became a female was really gender-bending on my part. ? Like one of the most favourite anime I have watched. Do you know the slime? hehe. Anyways, you are currently a good author and how much more if you improved! That was something I look forward to. ?
Read 30 chapter And no mention Of fusion. ????????Total waste of time and expectations. Don’t Put wrong information to attract readers.
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Ok, I'm back after reading a few chapters; I really like the story, the writing is good, the grammar is good, the pacing is fine. It's not usually the story I'd go for, but I'm enjoying it.
This novel is ok as at chapter 103, the world background was ok,the story is good. But...There is alot of problems with the writing quality, alot of errors with the writing plus the story lacks detail in a lot of ways either with the quests, classes, equipments and even the story plots. For instance how long did the tutorial last. MC made a comment to the new initiates dying of thirst in the early chapters but we never saw this happen. The quest for water was a total flop, the group went out once and that was it no further updates. Though I assume it was a failure but after that was another plot and then the end.In shot Author needs to develop story better - more details.
Ah, the title got me! When I saw the genre horror and thriller, I knew I had to read more. Nice work, even from just a few chapters, I can tell it's a great work in progress. I really like it, can't wait to read more!
This is the first chapter but really it's make me want to know what is going onI think it's a great one_I am waiting for the next episode