Honestly, way better than expected. I really like how none of the characters feel one dimensional. My favourite thus far is Chu Li. Honestly, her description reminds of Chun Li.
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Somehow, the MC reminds me of Steamed Bun Invasion. Whom at the both ends of extreme, a PRO yet a NOOB.
A pro in mechanics (character control) and a noob in game technicalities (logistics, utilization of in-game items and other stuff)
MC is an idiot.
Last 18 years of his life are not told to us and all thats told is system said suffer 18 years no system and you will be OP
He gets system and goes from mortal up 10 levels. Then he decides to spend all the spirit stones system gave him and goes up 2 more levels. He complains about lack of levels when few seconds ago he was saying how people would be jealous since it takes them years to go up a level/s or so.
MC didnt even try to save some spirit stones so he's broke.
Then he doesnt know how strong he is but decides to go and hunt beasts. I mean he was a mortal and since it was never told what he did so I am assuming he doesnt know their strength etc but is like yep I got cultivation now let me go fight beasts ? Since he was never a cultivator we were never told about his last 18 years of life. Also just because you have cultivation doesnt mean you know how to fight. Also the beasts were higher level so it seems pretty stupid.
He keeps saying well I read novels in my last life so I know how this works....
Knowledge he should not possess is somehow just filled in by somehow saying he knows it
MC receives a physique which makes him the best looking man in the world. Yes this is the most idiotic thing because he decides to go work in the red light district. The moment he walks there every single girl is like do me...I mean everyone. Girls who have boyfriends, fiance etc...they all want to pay him....
So let me get this straight you just started cultivating and instead of being smart/hiding your identity, you decide to go flaunt it knowing you could be captured?
I mean atleast enter brothel masked and talk to people there to work there before showing your face.
I mean why doesnt he think they could place slave seal on him? force him to work
You are at the weakest cultivation realm and you are going around like an idiot...
Yeah I cant handle the amount of stupidity
*SIGH* why don't you just rob a bank if you want money so badly, you still locked chapters over a trash story*SIGH*. I really want to sue web novel for allowing this over a trash story*SIGH*
If you like horror and sci-fi you're going to love this book! Intense fight scenes with great world-building that can't be beat.
Awesome work!
I really like the script format of it, it's very easy to read and it hasn't been an idea I've thought of for some reason. The story developement is very good and at its best.
This story deserves more chapters. It's been a while since you last updated it. There were some flaws in the writing, but other than that, it was okay. Keep it up.
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The opening has now been fully released with lots of positive feedback. Thank you all so much for commenting, reviewing, and most of all just reading. I hope you all continue to follow my stories through the release.
A very unique approach to storytelling with a nice personal touch. The author has seamlessly blended politics with history and created a realistic and gritty world.