Haha I like itI find it quite amusing! The combination of One Piece and One Punch Man elements is hilarious. Saitama's presence adds an extra layer of humor.
just found you novel and read the first 5 chapters bcz it is all it has now. well I really like the Sypnosis and tbh I really like the story till now, though there are many grammar mistakes like there are not commas and sometimes there are small 'i' which should be big 'I' hope you correct them.?????
Just finished it,
Well honestly the concept was quite good for a football fan like me, not that original but satisfactory given the lack of football’s related light novel.
The football world is really respected, I mean he must have done tons of research on football’s player in order to write this book, each player’s talent make sense to me, some football move like the pelopina turn are welcome.
Well mlt translation isn’t the worst but isn’t pleasant either, RIP Robinho —> Hovenue
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A good point in my opinion is that the romantic subplot don’t take much place in this sport novel.
I’m a bit mixed feeling about the 200chap+ of the story, in one part I feel that the story wasn’t kept for too long, lot of matches have been skiped and surely is becoming strong rapidly, on the other hand he is way to strong and the story lose some interest when he simply don’t know how to lose. There where some matches where they are 6 men on him and his pro team still can’t win whitout him, maybe misunderstanding due to mlt but puzzled me
Fuck this work. I mean srsly. There are so many similar novels why does this have to be chosen over something that is moderately better like The Mighty Dragons Are Dead. That had a new and Innovative plotline.
F*ck. At first I was excited thinking that this is an exciting and wonderful novel, but I was disappointed
That book is a nice surprise. I'm not used to the anime style but I could picture each and every scene with the accurate descriptions. The opening introduces you to the universe without information dump and the characters drew me to read more. Great work author!
I am currently 20+ in this Webnovel.
Okay, can I say how much I love how grounded and humorous the book is? I am definitely fine with romance, but this book gives a more refreshing take.
I hope Author-san posts more chapters! :)
honestly a amazing book that I look back on quite frequently hoping for a update. I always think to myself while going through this site that the great books like these with such potential always get cut down short. Author, if you read this, know that your fan base while now few in number, still exist. I will maintain this book in my list, waiting for the day it hopefully updates.
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Really interesting with twist and turns, expressions are so good that makes me feel that Iam also part of the story, I enjoyed reading the chapters, waiting for upcoming chapters, and want to know more about killer and motto behind