i Like it verry much is a nice Story and hast nice Charakters i Hope that the author Jeeps uploding also i Like the Virus system verry mutch and i will give you my Support ??
I hope you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not since the first few are a little bit fast paced and the conversations are not that smooth. I will try to upload at least 5 chapters a week and improve my writing quality every chapter.Each chapter will be around 2000 words
Me encanto la historia.Estoy llorando por el capitulo 25, por favor seguir subiendo que me encanta la novela. Espero que esta novela se siga actualizando y no se abandone.
I need to write this because I really love this MC. I like the fact that he loves his family, he's truly low-key, he's looking for ways to improve himself beyond what the system brings, and he's not using the opportunity to make enemies out of everyone. I love especially the fact that the constant shop attendant looked down on MC who gained sudden wealth and ended up getting shocked and fired scene that seems to appear in every modern system novel is absent. If not for the fact that I've only read 30 chapters so IDK how the rest of the book is, my rating for everything would probably be higher
Epic in all categories, I like it a lot. I'd recommend it to you. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Haven't read yet but I love the introduction or prologue i guess. I trust the author's work this time hohoho keep up the good work, author !!!
Its ok but it would be better with a little less detail, and more on the overall story. Other whys when you change it up the readers get loss and are confused
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments.The Dark Fields
Authors post. This is my first novel so there might be some errors. If anything sounds familiar then keep on reading as this comes from my head and my own personal experiences. I will say that the first 6 chapters might be boaring and dry as I’m setting up the MC. I come from a screenplay writing background so I might use some of those elements. thank you for reading this and any feedback is welcome. So without futher ado, enjoy this ride.
so far this is the best novel I have ever read ❤️❤️❤️❤️ author can you pls continue the series ?
The story is well written and enjoyable to read. The only things I don't really like are the blatant foreshadowing, but it seems to have gone away in the more recent chapters. I also don't really like reading the female character descriptions, as there is a large focus on their curves and breasts. There seems to be quite a big plot that will show its head sooner or later, but I can already tell the main basis of it through the not so skillful use of foreshadowing. The main background of the story is, while not completely original, a refreshing twist on the usual VR stories. Overall a good read, I am excited to see where the story goes.