The story is super interesting, but I lost interest when the MC who didn't show any sympathy for other people's problems *suddenly* sympathized with another foreigner...
classic pet novel with an MC with op hack. novel begins fast pace, (only one month in school). novel is good until chapter 350. novel changes after arc in first city dwarfs.
As the Author I shamelessly give myself a full 5star review?. But I hope to so more stars so I will work hard to the best of my abilities to give the best experience. CIAO!!
A very detailed background of world and lores following them. All the important characters have a fullfilling back story written, the story is easy to read and understand and feel the emotions in it... A great story steady updates and best quality writing.....
stop saying hurtfull thing to my novel and give a real critics that could make me grow. here! I give the low rating you guys want! if you want to insult anything just comment here! i will take all your insult! i am still a noob. but i hope you guys could be more understanding, i rather if you guys comment like daremyname that give low rating but with a reason so i could processing what i should do in the future. stop with shitty shit low IQ else. i give you guys a place here to insult me the author directly. i never bother if you guys give low rating, but a hurtful thing is still hurt for me as an author. I just want to cure my-self and have some meaning in my life, i know how trashy my novel is so i don't need your insult to remind me, what i need now is critic and advice that could make me a better writer. I just want to ignite my passion with this novel....
This is the author here writing his review. Of course I be rating myself 5 star because it my novel.Although I may sound confident, this is my first novel ever written and I tried to include multiple genres into the story to be more interesting.After writing each chapter, I would use a reader's perspective to read and see what is wrong and how it should be improved. Sometime, I would find typos or a line does not fit so I would go back to Inkstone to fix the mistake and re-update it.
To be honest here, the first few chapter hook me up to this novel but after that it takes a u turn and story gets dramatic.First the Mc was shown free and creating his own castle and suddenly he lost his control over power and attack his lover.Good story but execution is too bad and its lost its charm.
One word amazing. Its really hard to find stories like this while the mc being non human. There are a few mistakes like a misspelled word but if your like me and have autocorrect in your mind it wouldn't make too much of a difference but the plot is also amazing and continues to thicken and is not repetitive. The mc growth is fast paced but not to where you blink and miss it. Every 20 chapters or so, different upgrades for him his tribe or his women and wolves would come its amazing.I'm not really good with words but if you read it I promise you will like it.
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If you like vampires, overpowered mc then what are you waiting for go read the novel. Right now this novel only has few chapters but i can guarantee that you'll get hooked only after few chapters if you're a fan of this genre. Really waiting for new chapters. Till now great work author.
Thanks author you did a great job at making I like the way you decided to make the character more to the passive side then what most others would not many light novels sit the mc as a passive guy and fewer have the mc making things and this is the only one I read where the mc dose music.**. Thanks keep up the good work can't wait for more chapters
Slightly slow to start, but genuinely beautiful writing and a very well thought out and intriguing plot line, with an interesting main character. There is very little to bash about this novel, and very few that ive read previously can match it in terms of quality. Highly recommend.