Soon he was surrounded by a sea of all kinds of strange and misshapen figures. He did his best to hide behind one of the tree trunks and started to use healing magic to gradually restore his missing limbs, consuming all his emergency rations while at it. Like his uniform, those were stored in another of his earrings. Since Albusflores no longer had both boots, he shapeshifted into a unicorn, he would be able to move faster in this shape.
Last night was the best. I haven't felt this happy in a long time. It feels great.
Thank you so much, dear author!!! I had a great time reading this!!! ???
A comedy. A Heroine with stupendous strength which spells tragedy for others. Unbelievable antics abound makes a surprisingly addictive read.
Jia Yi smiled at Liuyun as he stroke his forehead repeatedly, her eyes not leaving him as she stared at the sleeping Liuyun. Shi Xi Wei smiled sadly and was about to leave the room until he was grabbed by Jia yi.
"What the," he gasped, as water vapour rose up. "Hot water?"
10 years later, Way still haven't return. So, 3 years after Way left, 2 of Way friends, a boy name Rain and a girl name Flower left the village to search for him and because they have nothing else to do at the village. They too, never returned.
There was no shortage of people gloating at her "misfortune." Previously, when Ye Qingtang was the first to step on the Path to Heaven, they were already in a bad mood as they were outshone by someone with a red spirit root.
perfect story with perfect character development
does someone here like formula 1?.......
This is a very lighthearted take on what should be a dark story, and not in a bad way. The introductory dialogue gives some idea about the world but could set the stage better. I wonder where you are going with the system. Simply writing that the end goal is for him to become living may be boring. Consider spicing it up (despite being lighthearted.) The grammar is generally quite good. There are a few errors around ellipses, especially in a quotation. You don't need to double ellipses interrupted quotations, nor do you capitalise unless it starts a new sentence or is a proper noun. Please do not use brackets, and this is not an error per see, but you should use appropriate speech tags when someone is exclaiming, don't say: he said, either use an exclamation attribute or do not use speech tags at all. This is just an example. Also, saying dead lived is contradictory; you can't live while dead, lol. You may want to change your wording. Promising start, keep going.
Really love the story keep posting it please???? I belivie this novel can get big af