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Bro i suggest you to improve plot development well. Because its kinda messy, i cant follow the plot at all, so im kinda lost..overal great story so far..good job
The story itself is extremely interesting, while the writing quality is at a perfect level for such a novel. The plot is enjoyable, and the characters' emotions are drawn out well. It's really a great novel! Keep up the good work, author!
as of 7 chapters all I can say that it has ridiculously good grammar and a unique concept. I'm sure the power system would be great, but only if it was explained, I might be saying this too early cuz he might explain it later, but I feel that if he told it later that it would be too late. I feel like the author is skipping a lot of scenes, cuz a lot of the flow doesn't feel natural, like him meeting basically god to just ending up in a baby body being tortured, or a fight that was about to ensue and next chapter has basically forgotten about it. the synopsis is useless, cuz I'm ch 7 and the only thing that has appeared from the synopsis is the name Michael, he wasn't even a game developer
Hehehe. This one will be so so so much fun to write~
Amazing Story, The writing style, the vivid details, the progression of the story, Everything is done excellently.
Just the details and the amazing progression of the story is enough for readers to understand the efforts put into it.
I don't really read apocalypse stories, but this story hooked me up. Read all the chapters and you will be amazed
The writer of this novel is a Brazilian youtuber called "zy" who was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude photos with a minor girl who was one of his subscribers. She was about 15 years old.
This novel is written in a entertaining way.
But that is the only positive thing I can say about it. It is garbage in any other way.
Whole premise is insane and the execution is horrible.
Stats have no context or comparison, so they are needlessly wasting time and space. Logically any motivated action would reduce motivation but the MC is completely unaffected. Stats only have an impact when it is convenient for the plot.
If the MC had more experience or mental maturity than an ape he could avoid at least 90 percent of the plot.
Typical I have been reborn without my brain syndrome.
Side characters like the MCs family are even more oblivious and stupid than the avarage family in transmigration novels.
Spare yourself the brain bleach.
blah blah blah he is too handsome bloody handsome fuuckkkkkg handsome even his mother willing to fuuuuck him that's how much of handsome of he is
Honestly, besides the fact that a non-human in a video game seems cool. There is nothing else special to this book
Gf of years turns out to be a gold digger
His parent owes somebody money he needs to earn
Wishfuliment to the fullest (both handsome and top of his class but still bullied)
With the power of Anger/friendship he evoles in game!
The stupidity this novel has displayed is incredible.
Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Jesus, sorry I have to write this, the mc is the most shameless, despicable and pervert mc that I ever read throughout dozen novel that I have in my library