It took me a while to understand the storyline, but luckily I have a little background in games. It's also a new challenge for me who is a romance crazed to read this new genre.
But good work so far! Keep on writing!
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Read the synopsis, it caught my interest,
Read 10 chapters.. I can say that novel is pretty good till now.
I am going to continue reading it.. good storyline.. interesting plot.. writing style is very good. could not find mistakes.
Author..plz continue with the updates.. and do not leave the book in between.
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Errmmm what should I even write. Everyone knows I'm bad at giving reviews.lol
First of all, I love the story. Reading it made me remember all the good times I had there.
This story needs a physical publication!I would wholeheartedly preorder a hard cover first edition with a smile on my face.Then it needs a manga and anime!
Story so far is pretty lit, I love Ian's motivations and his gradually rise to the top. Not to mention the attention he is gradually attracting to himself. I love his battles vs boss monsters, as it shows his growth and developement. Keep up the good work!
Enjoy the series, this is an alternate universe of earth, by the way, you'll see a lot of things that are different from our worlds, such as having 'Abilities' and the various jobs that come with the abilities, hope you all Enjoy...*Cough* Shameless 5 star from the author
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This story falls in the same pit of those other authors using the "old man" age without actually have the mc act smarter than your average 12-18 year old mc in other stories.could not read pass 5 since it weird me out when I see the mc acting like that (and no, mc is not acting to hide anything since it's him speaking to himself, already giving me an idea of what his actual mental age actually is)If you skip and ignore tha "old man" then it's ok. I think it's the same level of writing/plot you are probably accustom to in this site.
Pathetic utter waste of plot it was good until some Chinese supreme ideology started in this book basically all other countries are devil moron and Chinese are the most cultured blah blah Also they depicted Indian gods as devils mind it Shiva the destroyer can decimate a Chinese dragon(or a evolved snake) thousands of times over so mind it.
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