Just some thoughts, might contain some spoilers so read at your own risk. Started out great, and then sped up way too quickly. The rise to ultimate power was like what 30 years (not accounting for time slow down). It also felt like he would learn a new move then bam it would be gone and a new move would take its place. I generally prefer steadier progression than what this has to offer. That being said it was entertaining and had some good points so still a 7/10. Also it was basically everything given to him with him just having to suffer through large amounts of pain, no real comprehension was spoken of. I would have loved to see the limitless death seal used more. In the beginning it was said to have no limit and to cultivate it would require one to bear great backlash for each seal. I mean what would it have looked like to have millions or trillions of seals. I think there was just a lot of potential missed here. I mean even as I am thinking about it the Spiritual Bodies were cool in the beginning but then it was like ohh just strengthen it kill a guy then strengthen more and kill a guy. He was not really forging his own path which honestly is what I truly enjoy about these types of novels. O well, like I said good story, but could have been better.
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Good story..but has too many wording mistakes
more!!! I want more!!
No better than comics
A very good novel....
Although starting was a bit normal but it's good after 3 to 4 chapter...
I very much like it....
Must read if you want to read a horror story.....
Are you a new author, because there is still quite number of things that you can improve. But, I appreciate your efforts but I improved from that point and I am still improving to become best version of myself.
If you need any advice, you can comment here.
Keep updating
Man this is seriously one of the most engaging LN i've read. And i've read a ton of them. Some may argue that the pace is too slow, but if i find something to be one of the strenghts of your work is precisely that detailed build up. Keep up the good work, i'm a fan now.
I really loved reading this story, it had really impressed me in how well it has done, that's really interestingly great to read and every chapter is a guarantees it was good, that's even better than some translation novel you have read and I made a poem for dear Jun Hua.
For Dearest Beloved Jun Hua
Lonely beautiful Amaryllis flower that should not be shown,
Born under unlucky fate of star,
Disguised to be different so it could survive,
Death of a beloved and became Daffodil,
Oh, dear Daffodil became a lovely Heather flower.
Genius of opposite,
Talent that shines brighter than anyone but could not be shown,
Charisma shining brightly of a brilliant person who was born to lead others,
Dance of a flower,
Bloom of flower which became blossom the moment it step in where life can be taken any moment,
Called battlefield and the dance of a flower,
Mesmerized by all around her.
With growing flame within her heart,
Calming than the tree within her mind,
Unyielding will within herself,
Braver than any man,
Clever and cunning in a way that surprises by all,
Will she survived until the end?
Or.. will she failed to reach the destiny she wanted to come true?
What every it's and never matter,
She will not give it up and face the challenges for what fate has stores for her.
(A little bit details to let you understand my poem.
Amaryllis This flower is symbolic of splendid beauty. It is also used to indicate worth beyond beauty
Heather Lavender symbolizes admiration, solitude and beauty while white heather symbolizes protection and indicates that wishes will come true.
Daffodil symbolizes regard and chivalry. It is indicative of rebirth, new beginnings and eternal life. It also symbolizes unrequited love. A single daffodil foretells a misfortune while a bunch of daffodils indicate joy and happiness
The first stanza show about her situations, the second stanza show about her as Jun Min at battlefield and the third stanza show about herself)
I hope my poem could inspired you to read it and I guarantees you, it will not disappointed you and really interesting. I'm sorry, English isn't my first language...
Your writing was not perfect but still understandable so it's not a big deal. U also updated regularly and I liked the idea of your world. The character design seemed well thought but the story development and your pacing still have rooms to improve. Overall, well done and good luck :)
this is decent novel but i think webnovel should find other translator since he/she is kinda not professional (you can see it from his/her statement in each chapter or his/her announcement at GT, sorry no offense)
Webnovel ruined another story, it was free and getting translated and good with many fans. (Author has three good novels translated) It got forced into here and soon got cancelled. Why do this? Trolls of web-novel got another one down. As person who likes long stories this platform is really bad, storys get dropped here at 1000-1500 all the time. Why bring out new story every week if you dont have translators.