Bewitching Eyes
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  • Opolo
  • Status:Ongoing

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When the destiny is kind and gives you another chance with a Heaven Defying System that will help you achieve greatness, what path will you choose?

When fate puts you in a different bubble where life is more cruel but simple, will you be able to maintain your simplicity?

When life changes all of a sudden and you are faced to make difficult decisions, will you stay strong?

Meet Samad, as his life changes after an unlucky truck accident.

He will travel everywhere, making enemies, friends, lovers, and well-wishers.

He will observe, explore and discover various cultures and civilizations.

He will learn new skills, reach new realms in cultivation and he will try to find a place to belong to.
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release rate: 2 chapters/day for now

I will depend on you to spread this novel to other readers.
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p.s this is my first time writing something, so the stability of this story depends upon the readers. Please help me and this novel by leaving comments and reviews about the story. I am open to suggestions. Thank you

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You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is website
http://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf
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Yes, there are minor errors but hey, it was a fun read. I quite enjoyed it actually. But as a reader what I can say is that I cant feel what the MC feels. I mean he felt like a stranger that just being gossip to me. Just that. I hope this will help and I'll keep updated! Adding it to my library. Let's
keep on improving
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Giving the first review as the shameless author of this novel. The story is like practice match for me. I will do many experiments in this story to get the feedback of the readers. So please kindly guide me and help me improve the writing quality, character design and story development in a way that can help me in the future.
And please don't ignore my mistakes and also don't curse me or be angry when reading this novel.
I will be making thousands of mistakes and I expect thousands of advice too.
Please guide me.
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Writing Quality is good, there are little to no errors, some sentences were rough but still acceptable, how you describe something is a little bit lacking.
Stability of Uodates is not consistent enough.
Story Development is too fast paced. In Chapter 1 things happened too quickly, and there are some keypoints missing like, but since it's only starting, I guess it will be explained on the next chapters(If it will have)
Character Design is acceptable. It lacks description on how the MC looks and what his personality is.
World Background is also good, so no complaints there.
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism: You said "Break of 3-4 Days" but it has been 3 months, I would suggest if/when you come back to this you set it up to update automatically so that such an issue does not likely happen again.

Positive Feedback:  Well written well executed story. Good flow, and I don't notice many if any mistakes.;,;.

Personal Feedback: I'm honestly not really a fan of novels in which the MC makes their own Harem, and really, I tend to stay away from Harem in general for the most part (w/ exceptions being like "Isekai wa smartphone no tomo ni" AKA "In Another World with my Smartphone" where the Harem was forced upon the MC), therefore I will not be continuing this novel.;,;.
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Ohk your story seems interesting Mc carefree guy but not lazy work hard to survive & wonder what next on his journey for vengeance or love oh 3...
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