The start of the story is good. The use of grammar is impeccable and the writing flows smoothly. A boy shunned and looked down upon by everyone will now show the world what he is capable of. The skillful writing of the author is sure to deliver this story to us in the most beautiful way! Can't wait to read more!!
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It is a very interesting story. Especially the magic system is different and unusual. I like it very much. The story is written in third person, therefore we can read the stories and thoughts of all important characters. This makes the story more interesting. I am very excited to read more. Keep up the good work:)
This book is very much interesting especially from the beginning of the third chapter. There are many adventures and many things for humanity to discover. I think a lot of people will like this story. For a spoiler, an Alien race is going to b introduced in the upcoming part of the story.
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Good story can get frustrating though with some plot lines (especially the relationship with his mom.)The main character becomes inconsistent sometimes. Some of his characteristics is all over the place. still a good story worth the read.
I understand the premise and plot of the book but its not for me. I am assuming that MC will power up as he teacher, his relationship with virtual wife will remain same and he will keep ignoring the virtual wife in real life since he doesn't know her. This makes it very boring(as there will be absolutely no character development) and tad bit irritating.
The style is refreshing. Every piece of armour is possible. That is a Heram dream count. The weapons possible is in hundreds too, so now he must make a smaller choice group. Hoping he gets males too, that would make humor each time the male wants "masters love" too!
stolen story, really sad that modération doesn't do anything about it
story is going on a good basis with good story line....but recently the problem with the chapters not getting updated sometimes and initially there were two chapters per day but now one and sometimes nil. poor show I have taken privelege but I think it's just wastage of time if this goes on ...So plz resolve this issue and answer us back in cmmnt section
I don’t know what to say other than I love it!! It’s a great novel that I think most people will come to enjoy, tru it out I highly recommend it