Any book that came from Pancakes is bound to be Good, especially like Glitched System and EoC.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
The writing is lower on the spectrum but I won't say trash to others novel I read. However, from the comment I read so far it seem that it really bad before he got an editor. There might be fews errors stil in need of tweak.
What kill me is the characters and the setting;to be specefic it would be system. The system is absurd as it can summon gods yet it can't fucking heal the main protagonist. Then the wolf ****en neuter that leg. I couldve deal with a weak character but strong in other areas but when the MC solve the problem through plot Amor by allying with the wolf that made him pratically dead as a character and more of a puppet. The otherhand, the puppeter isnt well thought out or I'm expecting too much from a system novel. It doesnt give ant expantion of the system and why it all Earth(Greek) Gods. For example. Were the Greek God s ever worshipped in the the new the planet or is the system just generating/ acquiring Souls with potential of being gods with the geberated menories basebon the epics og hero and gods from Earth. Also, it seem that that MC could be more than a mortal or a mere God base on the system method of empowering him through collecing ,training, and battling wild goddesses. Also, i wouldnt have mind if he sacrifice a leg for godly speed or something but no he had to plotamored into allying with a wolf that would eventually be enemies. I say that because the wolf or Lyon; whaterver the greek word for wolf will be enemoes base on his backstory and MC identity of work traveler from a modern Democrat developed country which destroy the envirement and treat animal as pet as well. So it pointless and meanless other waste of time .
******Note I haven't got passchapter 50
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I don’t even know what’s going on, the writing is so bad. It at least has an Interesting premise though. The book has an obvious non native english speaking author. No world background (that I could tell) and if there was any character development in the dialogue then I couldn’t tell.
I think the titan character race could do with being a bit more unique besides just “imagine a man... but big..” but that’s just a nitpick.
If the author gets better at English or gets an editor that doesn’t mind all the work it would entail to edit this then this honestly would be a good story I think. We need more crafting stories overall.
This is a fresh idea and I’m thrilled how good this book will be so vote this book so that it comes out this/next week......................
The book as a whole is nice but to me it's exercise in frustration and don't tell me that's how 14y olds behave, killing changes you and he isn't thinking strait. Sure I could agree that he is hormonally challenged but when it comes to a pretty face he always mellows out out, why? Cuz s*x, that's why.
The rest is pretty nice minus the bog standart cultivation novel plot armor. He finds this plant that ravages his body and making it more powerful but giving him structural damage that would cause problems later. Oh look the nearby pond has just the thing... (Dripping with sarcasm)... What a coincidence.
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Wow, he knows so many information. But how does he remember all of that. I mean doesn't he need to hide and not let people know or he will get studied. Or did he practice martial arts.
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