Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't see many errors, for me it's almost perfect)Update stability: 5.0 (I don't need to say much about this, the author usually meets deadlines)Story Development: 4.5 (I honestly have my reservations about giving a grade like this, but I'll leave it at 4.5)Character Design: 1.0 (Very poor, the author can't present the characters well, not even his mc, the mc is the most hateful character in the story, even if after chap 40 he has a good improvement, he doesn't get to please me, he is sometimes very idiotic and not in an ordinary way, but in a way that makes him very angry, the characters' dialogues are very strange, robotic at times and emotionless, the way lovers treat each other tends to be too forced ... but with time it improves)World Fund: 4.0 (I'm enjoying what I'm seeing)
1 star
Although I liked this novel in the beginning, as I progressed upto chapter 81 I’ve decided that reading this was a waste of time and that the so called “MC” is just a simp.
His so called revenge against Hailey is garbage and the amount of times he let her off because of his so called feelings for her is outrageously stupid.
why are all the good novels I read hace a really stupid mc or a super passive one like make them more wise. ................................
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I'm sorry I personally like this story. This is just my opinion and I know a lot of people are tired of novels like these but I'm a sucker for system novels. I may have trash taste and I like almost anything but hey, it's just my opinion.
I like how the sect can upgrade itself but it's too random and just happened whenever the MC needs it. There hasn't been enough chapters for me to judge character development correctly.
We have no background story for when he was on earth but that happens with a lot of novels. Nothing would change if the MC was a native. There feels like no challenges are present and the MC can just steamroll his way to victory by a landslide with no difficulties at all.
MC doesn't act like a real person if he was actually transmigrated into a xianxia world and adapted quickly but hey, it's a xianxia novel.
Anyways, that's about it. I love trash.
One of the best novel I've ever read ,No !! It's the best it's #1 on my my list , the character development is good, all the girls have a story of their own ,character of their own and character development of their own ,the author didn't leave a space blank in the plot or character development of any female , and I can tell the author took reference from many novels to create his own characters which are very unique and don't overlap with other characters, I won't say the author is a genius cos it will be an insult to him cos he will way above that ,and one a level that can be called god-tier and I can say that the author has worked really hard penning down this novel ,and it's simple to read and it's focused of every reader around the world and it's easy to understand , the only thing I hate is that it became premium , right now I'm still free loading off my parents so I can't afford the premium chapters but next year once I start earning I will spend some money on this as a gratitude to the author for writing this wonderful novel and also support him and don't know what the future will be amidst this pandemic but I hope the author keeps writing and stays well and give a satisfying ending to this story and in turn satisfying his readers I have a lot to say about this novel but I just can't pick the perfect words to describe my feelings ,I love this novel very much and I thank author for this , I have never written such a long review for a novel ever cause I am very lazy at doing so but I could stop myself after reading this , ugggh I don't know what to say anymore , anyways thank you again author- San and keep writing ,by the way Satsuki is my most favourite character after akane ( akane is special after all) ....okay bye
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Hm, although it is wish fulfillment which has been quite saturated across the board recently. The saturation is 99% terrible novels, either by plot or writing quality. Although, this follows a fairly cliche idea the writing is generally pretty good. For that reason I give it a good review, also there is a lack of modern setting wish fulfillment novels, particularly well written one, based on simple grammar alone. So Good job author.
This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system...
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i love this story with new MC.
He is too cunning, Mysterious, greedy and funny.
full of thug life
pls continue this serious.
i have a question if mo fan and mysterious man have friendly duel then who will win?
Although this is an incomplete novel as of yet, I quite like it. It's unique to its genre and just overall is a good stoty. Also, love the consistant uploads author-san! I hope this novel becomes a sucess. Appreciate your work <3