CultivatorAsura
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Five Star support
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Five Star support
Reviewing this at 15 chapters that are out so far.. I don’t write reviews unless this novel is good, that being said this is my second real review. To start the whole ‘cultivation’ system is pretty unique in my opinion and I’m excited to see how it works throughout the rest of the novel. I also like how the characters are explained and fleshed out so far and world building can’t really be considered very much but so far we have somewhat of a good background of the empire the Draco family rules as well as the powers within. I’m really looking forward to this novel to take off with more chapters and have high expectations for this novel so far. Keep up the good work author, thank you!
This is surprisingly interesting and pretty decent. Although there's some elements of Chinese quotes and names mixed in. It certainly is better than most of the other novels for this round's Trial Read.
Probably one of the best things ive read on this site,
The characters actually feel like proper characters rather than cartoon cliches and everything flows nicely.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes going forward.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Really, right in front of my pancit canton?
This is a very interesting novel since it merged two of my favorite animes. I'm looking forward to how the story will progress. All the best, author!
hidden gem cultivation story; everyone that likes cultivation novels will love this one. This story has a slower much gentler pace which lets you understand the mc and his personality more which i really appreciate especially because most stories on webnovel are rather fast paced and only describe situations on the surface level.
Definitely give this novel a try!!!!
THIS STORY NEEDS ONE BIG EDITING SESSION, THERE ARE A LOT OF MISUSED WORDS.
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I have read two chapters upon making this review, and I can say that this book has a lot of potential. The tidbits of the world revealed were interesting. A few mistakes here and there, but with time I know the Author will improve. Give it a try ?
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
