This novel is a rewrite of Otherworldly Cultivator (My very first novel) and also Returned as Dual Cultivator With Spirit System (My third novel). For those of you who have read Dual Cultivator With Spirit System before, you may still remember Chen Li's cruel, cold-blooded, and psychotic character. I'm going to write this rewrite slowly, and I'm also going to make his character darker than before. Besides that, you may still remember Feng Xian'er's character as his main wife. In this rewrite, she will still be wise and playful but also cruel and sadistic as before.
The read was great and i have adhd so this being entertaining anough to Keep my concentration really shows that it was and Extremly well written novel
NGL this junk is really one of my favs keep dropping it, bro plz its too lit.Sincerly Mikai you are on of my favorite authors more now nun less
Es una buena historia pero le vendría mejor un poco más de crueldad medieval.Recomiendo que a pesar de desarrollar los secundarios no dudes en sacrificarlos si se da la necesidad para desarrollar al principal no caigas en el romance demasiado pronto eso por lo general le quita chispa a la historia.Por lo demás buen trabajo y recuerda es tú historia así que tú criterio primero.
Your writing quality is superb. I love the way you describe the characters. The fact that he has a debt to pay and that his debtor's sold him reminded me of how brutal some debtor's are. The synopsis is short, but straight to the point and I like that. Overall, a great job considering it's only 8 chapters. All the best, author!
There's not many chapters to make and accurate review but so far it's quite interesting... Btw, even tho there's the modern tag.. For now, seems more set in a different world than on the earth...
You make me discover DSI on xianxiaworld and I thank you for that but now please drop this novel and give us a chance to read it till the end.
Alright, where to start with this.When I started reading this novel, I became hooked on it. The world seemed average nothing too unique but the idea of an MC getting godly swords every year on his birthday was interesting.I like his interaction with his sort of adoptive sister but you can quickly tell how their relationship will develop in the future.He has companions/disciples who surprisingly stay relevant and aren't just abandoned half way through, though I'll be honest, as the MC gets stronger and stronger their existence becomes weaker besides being used for comedic relief or creating ******* between the MC and some of the factions that exist in the world.This is all well and good except, it quickly gets boring...The MC is supposedly very powerful but the author constantly makes him fight completely overpowered enemies so frequently that the reader doesn't get any sort of sense of how powerful the MC is (at least for me) since most of his fights are barely won and only because he uses some OP ability granted by his sword that also leaves him crippled.Nearly in all of the chapters that have been translated, he is constantly running away or being chased by new factions he has offended.And speaking of powers, all the swords he gets have some sort of special ability and are given tiers and this is where I think the greatest failing of the novel is. The MC focuses on only using the most powerful tier of sword and that's fine but he hardly ever uses his swords logically. He just grabs the two most powerful and then uses all the other ones as basically artillery and we hardly ever read about him using his swords creatively or logically.For example, he gets a sword that the more evil the person he fights the more damage it does, but aside from when he gets it, he never actually uses it for it's ability despite frequently coming across enemies that hit the mark for using the ability.And that's the other gripe I have, he doesn't feel like an actual powerful warrior, just someone who heavily depends on getting the highest tiered sword and using it. It's like watching a pro player get a bunch of items he can use creatively but only using high ranking items because, "they're higher ranking so they must be better".In the end I'll still follow this novel for several chapters more but I'm almost at the tipping point to drop it.
Wow when you die and the woman you love is reincarnated and gives birth to you.. Dang man thats freaking crazy. I think the character building and the friendships in this book is great so far but im only currently at Chalter 130.
First thing first, until chap 505 when the story abruptly end, there were no harem or any pedo romance thing going on that sone people who only read couple chapters made a fuss of.The concept of the story and the world building were interesting but unfortunately the author seems lost focus midway and lost interest at the end hence the very abrupt ending.He/she seems took some plots from couple story but didn't know how to put it forward.Don't waste your time. I wasted mine.Your welcome.
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Shitty author with the same plot for all of his novel. MC paired with great beauty, the beauty got herself in trouble. MC fight for the beauty. Emperor decree comes crashing to MC. MC fight the whole nation for a girl. Fck i hate it when the heroine always get controlled in all of this author novel.