Author you are a beast at writing harem novels that are actually good, thank you.
Great story, it makes me want to read more, so please release new chapter faster, so how much chapter you'll release per week?My power stone is definetly going to this one,Thanks for making this story dude?
❤️?❤️?ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ?❤️?❤️☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆❤️?❤️?*･゜ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ･*?❤️?❤️。・°°・(＞_＜)・°°・。❤️?❤️?
We are going to be in the office tomorrow and will be there for the interview on the past few days and I will be there at this point I don't know if I can help in
The fact that the MC is 10 ruins the immersion, I could get behind these things happening to 14-15 year olds but 10 is just too young.What kind of bow could 10 years olds use to kill with or without training. Bows are not something someone can pick up and just use in that manner.Everything gets solved if there is a 4 year time skip before the first guarding mission.The other issues of using the wrong word here and there dont matter as much. Wheres the hook, we were promised someone to protect but this may as well be forgotten.The first chapter ends up as a mess, is this a scene that happens in the future or was this from a previous timeline.I liked the idea but my expectations were subverted and at this point I have little desire to continue reading.
Arthur please edit the earlier chapters and fix the formatting it's a chore reading it, I'm sure you could find a proofreader if you asked for one.
Auhtor never explains how thing/people look and what artifacts and skills do. Includes names. Can’t even describe what colour it has or how someone looks. ExampleExplains food: Good food. Fr? You make food but only says it’s good? Smh not explaining flavour and taste. Just saying it’s good is enough. Explain how people look:Beautiful woman, tall and strong man. What about Color of the hair and eyes? Nahh just skip that.Explain skills: Strength, speed. Not the name or what it does. Gets a skill? Nah just forget it and never use it. Plot armor hundreds chapters later: Suddenly I remember a skill that I can use.Explaining the detail of the fight: I dodged the attack and the next moment my sword hit his head and he died. Something like that. Or explaining the aftermath.Information about stuff: Misleads information due to the grammar. Power levels suddenly getting swapped by wrong number. Names gets confusing. Jim be careful said Jim . He looks tall and she’s also very cute. Is she female or male? Can and can’t get used wrong all the time. Information dumps is the worst as the auhtor swapped a lot of things.. it makes it really hard to understand.Power up:Nah let all the side characters and villains 2 stages higher than him level up.He levels 1 time up they level 3 times.Also when mc gets new power: Nah just nerf it. Killing rule? Nah just hide it.. 1v1 and he hides it. Not even bother trying it. Rule power: Extremly rare to find. Every side character, villain or random people has it. Really? Just give everyone the power of super elite. Fights: Holds back 24/7. Underestimating enemies all the time.The worst part of this novel is the grammar: Doesn’t improve one bit even after 300+ chapters.
Already hooked from the beginning. A nice read
please update....
seems interesting. All set to read this book. Thanks for recommending.♥️
WTF.... this is now the second time you’ve ended the story by saying the end when the story is nowhere near complete. This is very frustrating. Why would you do this??
I enjoyed this book so far. I look forward to finishing it!