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Better than anyone story. i really enjoy reading this story amazing i think you deserve full star:)lajgpaotgwoigsohgwoutsjvqpjfsboqhfiysyoiyw
the writing is good, story progression is good, I feel cheated by the fact that every paid chapter has the equivalent of half of it being the previous chapter. it seems as though the author is just padding the word.
The protagonist supposedly got tortured for months by a woman and is described as someone who became cold-hearted and ruthless yet not 2 weeks(?) have passed upon his reincarnation, he starts falling for someone else who basically did nothing much but look good. Seriously? Proofread your chapters please. There are also contradicting details or rather, certain details were left out of the story and just skipped with no explanations whatsoever.
As of now I havent read the novel because it has not reached 100 chapters yet. The main reason why I picked to read this novel is because I seen the military academy tag. I hope there will be different things in this academy like fighting tournaments, missions and mysteries.
What can i say author is fire and his other work is fire so this novel must be fire I hope you all give both author novel a try before then decide if you don't like it or not don't be like this people who look at one chapter or 2 then stop give it a try in tell 20+ chapter
I rate my novel low because I know for myself I need a lot of improvements regarding the structure of the sentences. But like that being said I want you guys to support it thanks a lot!
the story is really a great hidden gem!!!would like the author to1. make the chapter titles more expressive2. put on a good book cover3. make his writing style more dramatic4. put on a good and interesting summary all to attract more readers...best wishes for future?seeing potential in the story so dont disappoint(first time writing a review)
I can't describe how much this novel it's good. Obviously you can't actually take my word because I'm make the revision of this novel with insane amounts of mistakes that some I can't even see. I'm actually just waiting for me to reach 140.......................
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It's been three years since the author last published the last chapter and she still hasn't in updated any more chapters, so I want to ask, is the author still alive?If you're, at least leave the name of the novel in its original language so we can continue reading.
I'm a straight male who doesn't have any thoughts of becoming gay anytime soon. I fear this novel will turn me gay... But I can't stop reading......