What kind of joke is this? Only the first chapter makes sense with a description, next chapters do not make any sense at all, it's like completely different story. Since i have started to read novels i have never seen such a ridiculous situation.
The story is okay, but the Mc is way too stupid for his own good, I like how he helps his subjects, but every time he helps them he always leaves it unfinished leading to more problems to arise for them. His choices of taking in subjects that were his enemy is also stupid, but due to the story they converted to his followers because he is strong. The Mc could be way better than what he is right now, we also barely know anything about the world, also the characters are barely fleshed out, all we know is oh she got curves and she’s beautiful, that’s it. Overall my rating is
Translation quality: 5 stars
Stability of updates: 5 stars
Story development: 3 stars
Character design: 2 stars
World background: 2 stars
3.4 stars
Shameless review from the author himself. I absolutely love it. I know that I need to be regular and work hard. Well...I have thick skin so, I have no problem doing this
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The premise is well thought of and the characters emotions are portrayed in a genuine way.
Aside from some minor grammatical errors, this is a gem in the making.
Well done and write on.
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The descriptive setting is good, the author hooked me on the first chapter.
Stability of updates is 10/10,an author that updates a book twice in a day! Recommended for those people are into steampunk! This is the first book I've read that has the subgenre of steampunk!
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Not very good compared to other sign in novels especially when looking at the power scaling of his cultivation, the setting's cultivation system and the frequency and quality of sign in rewards. Pretty much completely skipped 2 full realms only to then put a huge blockade to reach from the third to the fourth and just stall it out. A lot of irrelevant information, generally not very interesting since sign in rewards are hardly mentioned and the progress is so slow. wouldn't recommend.
Love the story keep dem chapters coming.…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..
good story, I want my more, no I need more, so make more or di- I mean or you get bad grades at school.------------------------------------------