This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Just wowww... I enjoying to read this novel..I realy thank u for this gift..I just wanted to tell u that how much I really enjoyed to read this novel..thank u authour..Keep rocking
This is a story that is not one. The author is only rewriting Douluo Dalu and adding a few sentences like: "MC looks on with a smile on his face".
The biggest tale that there is a problem with this is that you could replace the MC with an object and you would have the same things happening.
The problem is that the author wants his character to be with Tang San and co and doesn't want to change the story but doesn't make it so that his character has a story.
As an example, during the Shrek academy arc, the teachers teach nothing to the MC because he is OP and doesn't need help with cultivation, but they could have set up a regiment to make him gain true experience by sending him on some adventures.
What I meant by all of that is that the author doesn't make a story parallel to canon so that his character can live in the douluo world, he is only witnessing and doing nothing.
That's the negative of this story, and since I don't like being negative about things I will talk about the positives.
In terms of story updates, the author is constant and the quality doesn't fall.
The writing is good and it is easily readable and aside from the common mistakes, like quiet (volume down) that becomes quite (quantity), you will not find anything to complain about reading this.
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First Review - Chapter 308 . . . A Book Worth Reading, It's a good Eastern Fantasy for anyone that likes this gener .
( Below things are all Personal Opinion)
Pros -
1. Well Written With Few Mistakes in writing quality.
2. Good Power ups With Steady Pace , need improvement but Works.
3. Not biased on only one or two characters .
4. No overly done sensitive things for kids so kids can read as well .
5. Characters aren't 2 dimensional
cons-
1. Same word mistakes for hundreds of chapters with no improvement . ( Ex: ConsOriginal that should be Conspiracy )
2. Characters feel alive but none feel too important.
3. Lack of Minor details that create suspense or thrill . but the author did try can't deny.
4. World Building needs more work and details .
that's it for now , I'll make another review later after throughout observation and reading there are more then 2000 chapters already after all .
I read my novel, I actually read my novel on the app to re-edit the published chapters, so yeah, I guess that makes me a reader.
By the way, this is an entry for WPC #... I forgot. Anyway, I am glad you chose my novel for reading.
PS- I have the cover posted below if anyone wants to download it.
I only really have one comment, and it’s vital that the person publishing this book on here reads it: Please, for the love of god, find someone to handle the grammar for you. Find a proper translator to handle this so it doesn’t look so blocky or cut off in areas.
I read the last book you had on here, but after a while, the grammar started causing massive headaches. Your story has plenty of potential, you’re a great Storyteller. However, you NEED to find someone who can make it look more readable. You will scare away hundreds of potential readers who can’t handle this lack of care towards the language and the story. Otherwise, you’re doing great. Just make sure you work hard to find someone who has English as their first language to properly go through and fix the grammar. Using translation tools DOES NOT WORK.
Edgy mess that isn't worth anyone's time. Translation is so poor that I have no idea what is going on with a number of important things like what cultivation levels are or how cultivation even works. The MC has no motivation other than to ... be evil? I could go on but it isn't worth my time.
Ooohhhh op. no plot, bad translation. overall please avoid to preserve braincells.
No Seriously. This novel is so dumb you might as well read a machine translated Novel on another site.
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