Life is tough but even worse for Beta, who is still in his early years. Hopefully, he will get stronger as he grows up and even more development in the future.
Still a work in progress but keep it up! I'll back you up all through the way
The best novel!! This story is funny as hell
Started off good. Didn't stay good.
It's got a new format I'm not used to, but when you get to it it's a really fun read.
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I'm enjoying this novel a lot so far. The Plot is getting interesting and the interactions between Yu Hua and
Qing Ya are priceless. The Comedy is great, as I got a few laughs here and there.
Definitely worth a read.
the story was overall good, this was my second time reading this book
-Story 9/10-Harem 8/10-Lemons 8/10-Romance 7/10 (Atm) -Adventure 9/10-Protagonist 10/10-Updates 3/10I don't have many pointers I could say about pros and cons about this novel because the story were slowly progressing because of lemons/cultivations explanations ,world background explanations and many more etc. (chapter 120)but here is my personal opinion:It's a decent novel among many harem novels Its isn't a novel where he jumps to every woman he only choose choose best of the best among them(currently 3 of them),Lemon scenes is also decent(author knows how to make spicy scenes) ,He(MC) is also immeasurably OP and his past life story were still mystery at this point (chapter 120 ),also his adventure exciting because he travels and explore different and unknown places also there are dungeon hunting elements in the story (dimensions) and the only downside of this novel is the slow update Im hoping for a faster release. Thank you Author
Honestly couldn’t get more than a few chapters in due to no proof reading to find all the easily spotted fat finger typing? Random characters in words random letters in others. That’s without the normal mistaken words because English, and the main characters name bouncing back and forth between Jake and Leon
Ok there’s 2 major issues in this book that I know for a fact a lot of readers drop books for so if you can’ t get past these there’s no point reading this book..
First is the system basically making the character a slave it will do whatever it wants and will punish the Mc if he doesn’t listen this is a hard no for a lot of people.. especially considering the fact that if the Mc wanted to in this book he could actually threaten the system in this book… but that’s on you if your ok with the Mc having basically no choice over any of his actions in the future…
The second major issue is the ungodly amount of grammatical errors…. These range from mistakes in states misspelled words and straight up forgetting which book the autho is even writing since his MCs names certainly get mixed up…
Now if those don’t make you wanna drop the book then yes it’ an alright read if you have some free time I would man however reccomend reading it unless it’s on the daily free books since the author hasn’t put in nearly enough effort for anything else
The world is intricate and vast, there is so much yet to be discovered but I'm drawn in every chapter, Who is the Conqueror, what is each characters puurpose? Well each chapter release has me beyond excited, I hope everyone gets the opportunity to read this!