LachgarVr2
Nice story
great so far....waiting for more...
I appreciate you all for reading to this extent,don't be too judge of our lovely Kyle,the next chapter will prove you that his ready to make that step????
No, but he begins taking care of his subordinates
Most of the time, you'll feel like you're in the middle of someone else's conversation without a real beginning. Writing is hard to follow since it jumps around from scene to scene without logical connections or context clues quite a bit. MC will be complaining or explaining something to himself in his head directly at the reader in a 4th wall break while scenes with unidentified speakers play out in the background before pausing his rant and looking at something taking place in front of him and start describing it. Translation seems janky in the strangest places like they took a literal meaning for a Korean euphemism instead of using an equivalent analogy. You'll get kicked out of any sense of immersion every few hundred words since it's confusing as to where they are in the world, timeline of the story, or characters within the scene at any given moment.
I’ve read many of these type of stories so I can safely say that the reason they can’t is because of the fate of a “villain”. No matter what they do, they will be perceived and treated as a villain when involved with the mc. Any mistake could lead to their downfall so actually the safest method really is to just be against the mc
Oh? i dropped infinite mana, but seems like i might be starting it once again
Blood Warlock might be something to check out...
Battle through the Heavens as well
I see. I think what you said makes sense. She did have a more child-like nature.
I can't really say much about this book but that it's too dead. the mc is not really relatable and some repeat words are.just too irritating. I was expecting a slice of life with intelligent mc and efficient use of immortality..but from where I'm standing...the mc intelligence is too low to be of great use..the future is bleak...☹️?
D*mn, this is still going on?? Does anyone know whether he went to his mother's clan yet, I've read till the part he was in his father's clan and was about to fight the strongest guy his age for a tournament or someshit.
What does IMITA mean
