This is really a good story.... Please update soon..
But the problem is the name of the character please change it makes me feel bad speaking his name.... But still... This story of yours is pretty unique.. I gues.... Keep up the good work.. And please update soon...
-thankx
I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.
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I'll advice u give this book a try.the author did very well in the background and character development and I'm hoping to read more❣️
This take on deku is turning out better than I thought, I read this based solely for bnha fanfic. I do not know anything about monster hunter but your description makes it easy to understand and follow. There are a lot of typos. But the story itself is great, I read all 20 some chapters in a couple hours! Please update more!
It's a funny and light read. It's an interesting story and would be great if the mc wasn't dumb af...
I mean his first technique the FOUNDATION breathing technique. He never even thinks to level it up and only levels up auxiliary passives.
It's a joke rly and just so fcking frustrating to read. I could understand why he only levelled up his strengthen passive first even if it was annoying you understand because of the comp.
However, after that was over and him having tons of points from it, the first thing he should have done is strengthen his foundation.... It's just so fcking frustrating to read
So yeah...
It's a really nice story, nice character development. I hope that the gaming part gets a bit more structure, I would suggest the writer to refer The King's Avatar on writing the gaming side of the story. But I am ready to accept all these little short comings hoping that the writing will get better as the story progresses.
To sum it up it's a great work and I recommend everyone to read atleast 30 chapters before dropping this book.
Love the first few parts of the novel! It was an action pack series of spells and fighting scenes that engaged me to read further. And the story about Scarlet, *cough* man, that was mind boggling and drama.
Kudos for the author~
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This story was an engaging read and left me constantly wondering what would happen next. I was challenged by the characters and really enjoyed getting to know them.
dear author/translator, can u tell us the update cicle of your book, please?
i think that chapter 1 has potential, and ill watch the story development with great interest.
Raw title: 妖龙古帝
Status: 3995 Chapters (Ongoing)
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