Slow to start, but seems to be picking up at chap 40. like the characters, and world building. I hope this keeps going as I'm interested in reading the whole thing.
Awesome work by the Author. The plot unfolds so smooth almost like velvet and the story has you on the edge of your seat with suspense. Keep writing, very good job.
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Its not good or bad, just dull and boringParticularly the mc who constantly makes excuses for being passive and patheticThe mc pretends he is avoiding trouble but he is just a coward (the irony being that he looks for trouble)The similarity to japanese wimp mcs is unpleasant
i would rate this lower but i can't anyways who locks before chapter 40 lie seriously? and the chapters that aren't locked are not very long so this book is trash
barely got through the first few chapters. I give up!I can't do this!if you ask me to describe why I can't.... I just can't! the story was no good for me. and I'm expecting the author will delete my review. though this is still a terrible read
[Overall review, not specific]Lovely, and well done. I personally think it is well-paced and has beautiful character- and world-building. It's pretty descriptive though so I could see how it would turn someone off.
I liked how it started and not just the typical wishful thinking and all those things that many people already know from reading a lot of "fanfic".- I found your story by chance (since I always check the part of novels and everything related to yuri, as I always give him a look, whether good or bad xD) i must say that it is at the same level as other yuri stories of authors of this platform that update not so often, but that if they have quality (and not to belittle the other yuri stories, but as you always read the same reincarnate with desires and be a character of a novel, then go crazy to know the plot and have all the girls xD) I started to like yuri's stories (I used to read the normal harem stories, but eventually I started to get bored of reading the same thing, but when I happened to google in the "novel update" section, I found little stories that were about yuri's stories. I found small stories that were of "girl love
I wont deny, i enjoyed book.. it is one of the very few system based novels that i like, but unfortunately there are two huge loopholes in the plot in recent chapters. that turned my mood sour. 1. about khrom and rayna: khrom was incredibly guilty after he misjudged his wife and killed he, but suddenly he started new married life, just after a few months.. how does that make sense?? i would have no complaints if his wife was killed by others, then the story makes sense.. but when aythor added that he misjudged his wife, killed her and incredibly guilty for his action, romantic development with rayna doesn't make sense.2. this one is way more fatal than previous one. both siblings seldom remember their parents. okay, even if i understand that they are worried inside, but dont have the power to do anything, thats why they are just waiting.. thats also good. but suddenly mc went on a business trip, he didnt think that his parents can come back in mean time. okay they were aboyt to come back in some days, so that does not matter. most importantly, after accidentally arriving into anothet empire, why are they settling down. instead of going back.???? why did her sister said nothing when mc proposed to start a shop in the capital??if author notice my review, i would be grateful if you are kind enough to give me a proper explanation. or please correct these two loopholes, such obvious loopholes hurt my head. anyway, you rock, thank you for writing such an amazing book. please dont make it trash in later stages, or i will cry.. for me this is a master piece
Just another generic system novel with an insufferable MC.
You can see just how bad the books on voting must be for this to get picked.