this is my honest opinion about this novel: i have expected more from it especially how it started, like how the mc was a loner and how mature he was for his age (the author proclaim him to be)and all those things. it all start to go down for me when kat died and instead of him getting more mature is almost like he's getting more childlike. he was given a mission from his grandfather to seek out his parrents and to get stronger, and honestly form me he hasn't been focusing on those things. its more getting girlfriends and when they leave him or when he needs to leave then all he feels is lonely and being worry almost all the goddam time. he's been traing for one and a half year and yet other just easily get to his level and by other I mean the girls.so many ups and down that instead of making the story greater its just making it worst. one of the thing i hate the most is how long it takes for the mc to increase his strength. he also loses a hole year unconscious in some kind of spirit world and the benefits he got from that is not worth mentioning. last but not least his life and death is in hands of some blue hair girl till now I don't even know who the **** she is.if you guys stil want to read it give it a try I'm even suprise at my self that i have read it till chapter 223 but to me its not that great. i will keep reading it just to see how it will end.
Loved this story. It was a great read, most esp seeing as its not what I'm used to.The story line was good and the chapter length as well.The author did a great job, although there were some errors here and there. But what can I say, nobody is perfect.
The concept of the book is interesting wherein an artifact, in this case, a pen, bonds with people to grant them superpowers. The opening scene is done well too with power-hungry people searching for the pens.Though, a little proofreading/grammar check is required to eliminate the simple mistakes. Keep writing !!
I love the story from the beginning and it is such an amazing story!!! The characters are so realistic in the plot flows so well for me there is nothing that can make this story better!!! You won't regret spending your time reading the story!! ❤?????
don't read it MC is super beta scared of everyting if he don't outlevel enemy by 10 times he will run away STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA
After "I am the legendary mechanic
Is no one going to realize someone has already been translating this on this very site? The one that's been here is over 100 chapters long already.
Overall good, but it takes too long to update! ? Well I don't blame anyone, my impatience is the one to blame... I thank the translator for his hard work! ?
astral pet store copycat? meh...,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
My only comment, if you're into ambiguous commentary that kinda of border on hentai? Then this is the novel for you. Everytime something like that came up it just took me out of the story, it was so distracting. Meanwhile my search for a FANTASY ONLY pet novel continues. Unfortunately a lot of them have weirdo perv MC's, Harems, Romance or Slice of Life. Seriously Monster Integration can't be the only one out there can it?
I hope they decide to write a sequel or a second arc. I've enjoyed this very much. so many things left in question for there to not be more.
Not sure since I have not yet read this. But for those who think this kind of webnovel about a webnovel on a webnovel is the first one, then you are wrong.It is already very common in MTl novel for story such as this that it became a genre on each own (acgn writer genre).ex : the era of the second element of literary.story about a tranverseer(transmigator) who goes to alternate reality of japan with no anime, novel, manga, games that you all know. She(female mc) then recreate the otaku culture by herself and even become a seiyuu, singer, game creator etc that is related to the second dimension.most related work can be search with the term "two dimension" "second dimension" "second element" etc in MTL novel.com or [writer] sub genre.you can also search it at Comrademao or Jpmtl too.