The Story is clear and very enjoyable. The reason i gave one off is because the MC is written with hesitation but otherwise its a wonderful story! I recommend a read.
Supportive friend here!!!??I haven't read this yet but for sure this story is awesome??I trust the author of this book. More power tee❤️?
It is a amasing story with a funny protagonist .I already think about a super bike with OP skills and powers and the chaos that it will do.Thank you for the work.
Overall a pretty good first 40 chapters, really wish the trial was 60 instead... There is a lot of maths and science (real/pseudo and some errors that may have been translation mistakes) but there are some good interactions and an interesting premise. Unfortunately the trial ends too soon to know if there is any great mystery or insidious action or if it is just a slice of life in a spaceship with a bumbling math nerd. Overall, if you don't mind being hit in the face with heavy math laden conversations and a slow steady plot, this is worth a view.
This novel is definitely among my faves. It's up there with Mech Touch, Chrysalis, Lord of Mysteries, and I became the Pope.I wish I could lock the author up and make him keep writing, but I understand he needs to make a living. Please give this novel a chance.
i am at chapter 250 right now and this is one of my favorite novels on here it can be confusing at times to understand stuff or who is talking but that might just be me (also is there a discord if there is one can anyone throw a link my way many thanks in advance)
Shameless Author Review, because I really enjoy writing this novel. MC is stuck as an 8-year-old in game. It's different. When writing I couldn't decide what to call the game world so I left it blank. It was kind of my own personal joke to just call it blank.
not good at doing reviews but here we go. really nice story. the author is good at writing fighting scenes and I love how someone else loves the galaxies as much as me! this is really nice author, keep it up!
I love system stories, please don't make the system bland, make it interesting if you can. With that said from what I have seen of the system from the first chapter you could make it clearer that its a system and not just a voice in our protagonist's head.
Finished chapter 1, can't read more.Needs to be edited properly. It makes sense but it's either the wording or broken sentances that needs to be fixed. Example in chapter 1, " it took much time for humanity...." fix it to " it took a long time for humanity....". Remember to use commas, and don't keep switching between past tense and present tense, it makes reading a nightmare. A tip would be to write a plan or direction of where you want this story to go and then write a timeline of events and/Or conclusions. Don't write they gained control of distant dwarf planets then write how they started the space exploration era, switch the two sentences around and it will make sense. The rest of this is just fillers.Vuvuvucyxychuvuvucucuvuvivcycycucivobohogudydhcivibovivucuctxrxtcuvivibobigucycuvuvivivicuctxtcucuvigivivivivuvucuctxtxtxtxrxtxrxrxezextcyvibobobivucyxtxtxycuvivivivivuvucuctxrxrxycuvuvivivvuvuvuvuvuv
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This is a story with a similar feel to "History's strongest senior brother" or " History's number 1 founder" or library of heaven's path". But it is just not pick so sad ?