Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!).
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Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing.
Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow.
Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned).
Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time.
World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope)
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Shameless Author here! Probably a narcissist, too, for leaving a five-star review on his own book. This is my first contracted novel (which makes me a newbie), so please feel free to leave comments if you find any mistakes here and there, and I will fix them (I have fixed a few errors thanks to a few commenters). And it will be worthwhile. This story will be updated daily with chapters, and if you have any questions, please reply below, and I will be sure to respond to them.
I love the story and I’m rereading it due my first time of stopping around the 20th chapter but it’s one of the only stories that I can read through over again and still be entertained as well as I hope Nico, as well as Max get into a relationship. But keep up the good work.
Novel is ok, quite bland story, basically just basic level up plot but interesting enough if you are bored. For while.But around c200 author just totally destroyed the story, MC gets skill to fuse with his pets, and lo and behold, this is no longer beast taming novel. MC just fights everyone in his fused state like this is some cultivator story and his beasts are just bloodlines he has. Story just lost even the hint of originality. This already happened with the pet shop story. You can't just make pet/best taming story, and then turn it into freaking hulk smash cultivation story
Overall I had i hopes for this novel however the reality of it is that this novel is ruined by the incompetent translator or proofreader. My eyes bleed over the bad gender translations and some idiotic paragraphs which I put down as a cash grab with word count. One particular phrase in the MCs second reincarnation was his reference to his mother as a cheap woman. The negativity attached to such a phrase seriously wore on me a lot.The obvious east vs west bashing is strong in this book and this is seriously a shame as it could have been so much better.Anyways the fact the novel was on a free read allowed me to read this and even getting up to 100 odd chapters, i really couldnt stomach it anymore.Overall, if you can look past the woeful translations (MTL at its finest) and the culture bashing then maybe you can give it a go, however my recommendation is give this a hard pass.
I like it it very good the mc has great decision for his owner the story in the simulation system is great the power lv is perfect cant wait for the next chapter
Started reading when there is a free read trial and now become addicted to it. Aah what to say? Highly likable MC AND TENSION FILLED CHAPTERS. Side characters are likable and flow of story is seamless. Overall a feel good novel. Highly recommended if you guys want to experience a new feeling other than reading novels like SS, SM, MTWV AND OTHER classic novels!
I love the story, and that it's a continuation of Solo Leveling. I'd give it a perfect score if not for the drastic drop in quality when it comes to characters' names starting at chapter 104. I'm currently on chapter 108, and I hope it gets better. Once it does, I'll gladly change to perfect 5 star review!
Very enjoyable, some minor delays in updating but good read. i vote for The book every other day and gIft every 45 chapters. Reasonable original content and enjoyable character interactions.
Novel with fun consept and lot of face slaping. Sadly its writen over the top and reading it makes you feel the need to lower IQ.
I really would like to read novel with same concept but not a target audience of elementary schooler.
To sum it up I am sadly disapointed...
Good use of words, the story develops well through out the chapters and the picture created is beautiful, it compliments the subject of the story
I'm kinda curious about this book. I'm just putting everything as 3 stars for now so I hope this book gets picked up...............................