AbiLIon
It’s well written for the most part, but it still falls into the ever common trap of most modern setting Chinese novels; it’s racist, sexist, homophobic and transphobic. The premise is interesting at the beginning, but it just gets boring after a while, following the same plot line with small tweaks of
*gain new knowledge* —> *come across wacky situations than can somehow be solved with it* —> *solve problem, but not without spending 10 chapters talking about how everyone underestimates him* and rinse and repeat. I read up to nearly chapter 500, and the quality just decreases. Even if all those things still don’t put you off, you still don’t need to read this, I’m sure you can find some other face slapping system novel to read, god knows there’s so f***ing many out there, some of which should probably be at least a bit less racist.
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an interesting story to read, after reading up to 20 chapter, it refreshing to read this.
Website : qidian china
Views : 4.67 million
Rating : 8.3(610)
Chapters : 717
Status : ongoing
Word count : 2.00 million
author rank : lv5
it was a good read. the mc is not ungrateful to his family and loves them. he is a young master but not the typical, has a good sense of humour and certainly is not a puss
It's just typical transmigration story like other stories in Webnovel.
MC get back to the past, have beautiful females on his side, bullied, learning superb skills that only he knows
It's just so-so in my opinion
as of chapter 12 I can say that the characters feel incredibly vivid and realistic, the dialogue doesn't feel awkward and the world building is certainly there with purpose. however the grammar is utterly awful, author does take steps to fix it, however I feel he/she over-relies on the readers to point it out(I fear that when I get to the locked chapters, it's just gonna be a literary mess). when it does get to locked chapters I guarantee a lot of people will pull out, cuz the chapters are like a swipe long and continues to be until like ch 80, author did say that he Increases the word count later, but he did it far too late. could be one of the greats if only it had:
1. better grammar
2.longer chapters
No spoilers for story but this novel turns into a cringe China vs the West by MC's second reincarnation. It happens after chapter 40 so you won't know from the trial read.
You've all been warned if you're not into that.
Gosh dang it! I need a Lily in my life. She is so adorable that you can’t help but want to spoil her and love her. She is, as you say, perfect! I wasn’t sure how I would like this story, but I love it! Damian needs to marry that girl!
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An early novel with all lot of potential starts off slow so far but due to the system settings it will most likely get faster and faster and then start effecting the Mc main world moving higher and higher but the gist of it is that the Mc can simulate life from birth through death and attempt to increase his grade out of all the new novels this one is probly one of the first to go down this exact path so a plus for that if you have ever read tavern in another world or like novels about a variety of characters from different genre's this will be the one you want to support. it can also probly be given the tag weak to strong eventually.
The story is still at its infant stage, the characters are still developing. Unlike typical novel where mc starts to take chance or luck encounters of the novel's mc ,the mc is walking his own path.
Though not much is introduced in the the initial chapters, the detailed development of mc power is shown.
So, I am expecting more from future chapters.
I will leave with 5 star for now. Looking fordward to future chapters.
