I will shamelessly support a work from fellow writer, so I hope u can get what you want. Also I expect to see a different plot line that’ll be different than normal ones. Do your best and show yourself!
Para que se hagan una idea de lo lento que va este libro, por el capítulo 90 recién va pasando un solo día y recién salen de una prueba que tendría que haber terminado en menos de la mitad de esos capitulos,un arco donde presentan a tres demonios que ni siquiera vamos a recordar solo para salir de una puta prueba que dura como 15 capitulos
Is this not just a copy of another book?............................................................................................................
Time for a shameless review.Here, there will be some answers about the story.1. Will there be a harem?Answer: No there won't be.2. Will the MC get younger?Answer: Yes, he will get younger physically. You know, since he cultivates immortality, the stronger he gets, the younger(physically) he will be too. (Quasi-spoiler?)3. Will it be updated regularly?Answer: Yes, it will be updated regularly. But sometimes, there may be a reduction.4. Is his system annoying?Answer: No. His system is the silent type. Generally, it doesn't talk, it only gives out text.5. Will the system force the MC to do something?Answer: No. It will at best put a mission. There may be penalties in the future, but fret not, those penalties won't threaten the MC's life nor his power.6. How does the system work?Answer: This system won't force the MC to do anything as I said above. The only way the MC can get stronger is by cultivating strong people. But maybe there will be a slight change to it in the future. Btw, he also gets stronger by cultivating himself too.7. Is the MC stupid?Answer: Lol, in almost all novels, MCs are not stupid. My MC is an old monster, therefore, he's not stupid. The side characters are not people who will come to provoke the MC straight out like a fool too.8. Will there be face-slapping?Answer: There will be. But there won't be the generic face-slapping like you see in some novels where it was displayed once per 2/3 chapters.9. How is the world background?Answer: With just the synopsis, genre, and tags, you can guess it yourself.10. English is not my first language, so there will be mistakes inevitably, but I will try to reduce them as much as possible.11. You, yes you, my readers, don't forget to vote for my novel too!!!
The story is not bad, but it has a ton of sudden jumps with no context. He transmigrates to another world (this is fine so far), he plays a video game once or twice (which I have a hard time finding why he got it in the first place, he may or may not be blacksmithing- I cannot really tell. He meets 15 different people and I still don't know who is who half the time. It does not really clarify what his systems are a whole lot
Another trash novel.Mc only complains and call others hackers. The system also sucks. The story is nothing new and plot is also copy and paste. Don't recommend reading.
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Started off promising but turned into a cultivation novel after chapter 130, dropped. I dont understand why authors always go this route whenever they bave a system involve in the story. I also don’t get why MC always getting frustrated when he doesn’t have enough energy to spend when he can just sleep for a couple hundred years.
unbelievable it was very unbelievable. This novel is on a whole different level.
I stumbled here upon chance.
The story is good from the start but when I reach chapter 20+ all turns arbitrary and seems the story direction is very poorly planned.
What the use of level 2000000 if the IQ is very low.
I can't believe I just wasted my time reading this.
I understand the premise of the story and it's definitely something other readers would like, but it's not something that I would read past 30 chapters.
I rate it 5 stars. Let's try if the Author will delete this rate of mine. Because I heard that they could delete this if they don't like the review.
author hi thank you for this novel and I like it but is it normal that it is so much to filler with the last chapters one has the impression that it does not advance at all the novel is cool but if there was less filler it would be more interesting