A chunky and overall bad read so I’m out
Hi, author here! The reason why I wrote this novel was because I got tired of reading novels. Then I had this thought; why not write a novel that I would like to read? Then I got to work. However, writing a novel was much more complicated than I imagined. It even caused this book to be on hiatus two times this year. There are many times where I felt that the book was getting out of my control as I wrote the chapters. Together with irl problems, I was really close to giving up. Then once again, I had a thought; why not just do my best? So, here I am once again! And this time, I'll make sure to do my very best in writing this book. I'm a beginner so mistakes were inevitable. Still, would you like to go on this journey with me to the end? Let's witness the different problems Zen will face and the different powers he will gain from it! I don't know if there's someone who'll read this boring review, but if there was and you're here to read this little story of mine... Then, I hope that you'll have a pleasant reading experience~
I sorted have an higher expectations but got squash soon after...nice Grammer thou....with no mistakes after reviewing it again don't know if author got sloppy after the chapter I read.
all in all
it's all good on specific places except some places
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hmmmm it's a good story but im just a little
disappointed of the mc his naive as a half dragon my expectation of dragon but still i hope the mc can improve his mindset make the mc caring but at the same time can kill any enemy
I really like the story, it's entertaining and interesting to read. There are some awkward interactions between characters, some pieces of writing that don't seem to flow with the story. There is also an enormous amount of missing words, if the story was lacking in any way I would have dropped this before chapter two just because of how many times I have to guess what word should be where. It's like you didn't even bother to proofread this at all. How can so many errors be present in such a good story? So depressing.
Okay, so while the story was a little slow to start, by chapter 3 things started to interesting. The characters and realistic as are there interactions.
This story does have a lot of potential, it is just that the grammar mistakes make it a little hard to read.
Anyway, good job author.
after reading to the end lf volume 1, this novel is a hidden gem i could say.
its not perfect but still a better than a lot of popular novels here.
i found some chapters to be bad but most of the times its so good.
this novel is underrated imo.
This is a very good novel. I definitely recommend it to you guys. You sure won't be disappointed...
good novel but ITS cursed cant deleted it Out of my libray ,.................... ............................................................
Hello, I'm Tisha,
Wow, you really got a good deal of ratings, I mean WOW***.......