Like the first chapter cause its obviously well thought with detail and so long you could have posted 2 chapters effort shows. Seems like it will have a future.
I mean so far it's ok, but his naive character annoys me. I understand that as someone from earth he is afraid of killing, but I don't think Veronica does any unjust killing. in this kind of might makes right world, if someone disrespects you no one will bat an eye if u kill them. He keeps talking about changing Veronica, but he is the one who has to change. also, is killing not part of his training as someone meant to protect Veronica? seriously man he has to accept the reality of the situation he seems like some kinda fairytale hero
hmmmm it's a good story but im just a little
disappointed of the mc his naive as a half dragon my expectation of dragon but still i hope the mc can improve his mindset make the mc caring but at the same time can kill any enemy
