Must wait~ ??
Chinhwa's confidence went up, he was for sure they would find their mom. He grabbed Sarang's hands ready to run towards the ride, but before he could just like pulling a pole in the ground he was flung out to match his own force.
"Ye Qingtang, I remember very clearly the words you made me remember a while ago. I said 'if you could enter Xuanling Sect, won't I be a useless piece of trash?' Now, it is enough to prove that my words weren't wrong, isn't it?" Lu Xiuwen sneered.
"Very good, Rookie," Captain Shizo said with a grin. "Commence glacier creation and remember: No explosive shells. Even if you see what looks like a great shot, we don't want to injure his friends if we can help it and if the bridge gets damaged the mission's a failure. Afterwards, we move in on the bridge."
was in a different dimension!
La obra está bastante buena, me gustó, la historia esta muy bien escrita y es interesante, lástima que duren tanto para actualizar.Ahora pondré relleno MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMGMMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMGMMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG MMG
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A well done story better than many stories here on webnovel deserving more popularity. There are times that story seems like a high school drama, but I didn't mind it. Given their age, amnesia, and discovery of a new world puts a lot of pressure on the characters. You can feel the emotion and struggles of the characters as they fight to save a planet. All this happens in less than 1 month. The were always constant questions and mysteries the characters face that they slowly get unraveled over time.There are some grammatical errors but very little and do little to take away from the story. I felt fights were a weaker apart of the story along with the villains. After 800 years, they felt lax and not strong overall probably from arrogance? When facing multiple dark mages it felt like a 1v1 dueling style. The alpha felt like the weakest ones maybe due to not being able to control her powers?Overall, good story that deserves it's rating.
I really loved the novel. It's super great :D... I hope it gets more chapters. I will definitely start recommending this to more people :D
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Plenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios. Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far.The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes.I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.
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