Interesting plot! I like how the overall story blends! The idea is original and well thought out! There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but besides that, it's a great story! Keep it up!
É uma leitura bastante divertida e gostosinha de ler. O mistério do que aconteceu ao personagem no começo me deixa curiosa, mas essa calmaria de contar a evolução dele é bem interessante. A leitura flui bem e mesmo com uma ou outra palavra repetida, é óbvia a evolução do texto. Estou ansiosa pra continuar.Obs: eu ri ao imaginar que o guri de 3 anos já era malhadinho. Tá no caminho do shape perfeito esse daí
Misleading title and synopsis in my opinion.Mc is not a real Young Master because he doesn’t act like one after a few chapters he is your normal mc that struggle and fight to get stronger and even his young master act has a sob story behind it. I thought this would have a arrogant mc that has backing and comedy but it’s normal survival apocalypse story.
dropped? .
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IF THIS DOESN'T GET PICKED, I'LL RIOT!! ON GOD WEBNOVELTHE HORROR HOUSE SOMETHING IS ALREADY ON A PERMANENT HIATUS SO GIVE US THIS, JUST ONCE
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it sound really good i hope i enjoy it but you can not drop half way,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
How many floors should a bag of rice stand, how many floors should a bag of rice stand, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should a bag of rice be washed, each grain is muddy, who gave you a bag of rice!Spicy Tiansai! ! !
When did you start writing this novel ? How many chapters are you willing to post weekly (an estimation) ? Are you going to drop this novel in the future like some other annoyed authors ?
Great so far absolutely love it?also cover sauce? now dots... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . ... .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ..