What a crappy translation! the translator should either take a basic grammer/writing class or just pass the translation off to a competent translator like the 25th_chestnut.
It's a really good read, plenty of action in the first few pages! My only criticism is the fact that there is barely any info on how he died or what his life was before, hopefully it will be sooner than later.
RI is Er Gen's most serious novel; no real slap stick characters. PoT is overall just tragic. Main character just can't seem to get a a break. The transition to The Devil is the expected outcome after a series of unexpected events. Read it
First you say hes six then you say hes eight. Pick an age and stick with it. Second the mc has MAJOR rapist vibes. No idea Why he just comes off that way