in the first chapter alone there were multiple he/she mistakes, I see where this mtl crap is going and I want no part of it
15 chapters in:I've gotta say this novel is really well articulated. The fighting! the characters coolness!!! The engagement to the readers!! the story visualization!!! KYAAAA!!!!!ehem, I mean:-Amazing debut so far.-Great usage of words. -Characters are really well written.-World building is very interesting. -Squeaky smooth story pacing.Well, there is only 15 chapters so far, still in itty bitty baby stage. But the potential this story can grow to... BOOM! Huge!10/10 would recommend.
It was interesting Looking forward to where this series goes
Very good story but would like faster chapter update please ????????????????????????? I liked the story ????????????????????
this novel is interesting i liked it, i hope that in this novel there is no romance. KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA
a very nice game system story??. Can't wait till my boy gets super strong and starts bodying people left and right. I wonder if he will get a harem???
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The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb.Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.
The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb.Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.
This is way better than I expected. The way the story flows is really nice and how the characters interact and develop their relationship is pretty good, though the romance can feel fast, just remember that he is part demon so it will make sense how the relationships develop. My one issue with this is that it's kinda hard to gauge just how advanced the world is from a technological standpoint, like at one point there was the internet(mass information sharing spell) and laptops that are magical in nature, yet the way that they travel is still with Carriages and Horses (or occasionally dragon carriages). Other than the background being iffy at best, it's a very solid read.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 6.11millionRating : 8.0(968)Chapters : 1620Status : completedWord count : 4.94millionauthor level : lv3No of works : 5If you are interested, my reviews are in almost every novel with atleast 3 likes.