It’s an amazing novel and I would’ve gave the writing quality four stars there are a lot of mistakes but only with the placement of the words other than that and the POV of the human Davis i don’t see a problem.
The writing quality is good. But since you're writing from a past perspective, don't mix it up with present tense. something like end should be written as ended when something that you're trying to say. 'has' is a present tense and 'had' is past. Don't confuse it
This story blew me away. The world building is amazing, Jack is such an enthralling character, and even the side characters are well developed. The power system is unique and this entire story is so good that I am desperately hoping that the author keeps writing, and it gets the attention it deserves.
Very interesting plot and interesting concept.The character seems cool and system 0 is really snarky.I really like the timeline-jumping concept.The only thing that I felt could have been done better is to fix the grammatical errors but that can be fixed using something like Grammarly so no real harm done,
I'm very disappointed Quaden. except Custom Made Demon King every other novel in this trail read is trash af. (Of course not included the comedy novel which have a rating of 4.8/5)I'm happy if you have any recommendation of novels people don't drop that easily like The Great Mechanics or 48 Hour a a day.
Why is this underrated??? This was actually interestingly good! .... ..................................................
This novel is amazing.The characters are interesting, and they will grow deepen in later chapters. Something that was VERY rare in other novels recently.I thought this will be like System based novels that seemed to be popping up every once in a while, and I think that will not stop soon.After the first few chapters, I expected the quality of the story to dropping. It was due to the two MCs, their characters seemed to be hard to be understood.Yet- the Author do not disappoint me at all, the characters really grow, and although they seemed ridiculous (well, maybe they actually are, at least for the Male MC I was almost certain... If not for-) they are good. Really good.In short, like I had said, this novel is AMAZING.Btw, for the volume 1, you can reach the Author in Discord for it. He will give you a free copy.I asked him a few days ago and he gave me one. You can find the link for Discord in the chapters, or synopsis page.
Thank you very much, author. This book is very helpful for me who just getting started. I follow the instruction step by step, at least now i'm not strayed anymore. ??
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I like the potential for growth in the story and character design, looking forward to see how the adventure unfolds.Hope he gets the chance to get stronger and stronger as explores the world in this new exciting time.
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I like this novel coz it's short n well written....Female lead n male lead are cute but male lead is way to innocent about matters of bedroom...So kinda wired to read their first time ?N his super jealous I mean who got jealous bcoz of his child...