One of the boys behind him, after witnessing the frustration growing in Takashi, sighed out of boredom and said
"It's like sitting on a cloud." She turned to him and held out her hand. "Keys?"
"-why we chose this region to come to," Jin's attention went back to what Captain Clapton was saying.
The dice rolls, rolls and rolls and finally falls from the table, hits the ground in an odd angle and rolls to not even god knows where.
So, this is one of my friend's story. It was for our 7th grade realistic fiction/fiction unit. She got a pretty good score too so I decided to write it online, with her permission too, to see how much people would read it. I was surprised when the number when past 10k. Never expected so much.
< Well! > It seemed as if the Music System tried to forcefully seem cheerful- the speed at which the words appeared on the screen sped up, and the voice went up a pitch. < Music System will just tell Master the main points, then! >
I hope you can update the chapters quickly. I really enjoyed the flow and characters of the story. But it's been a few days and yet there are no updates. I'm becoming dissapointed.
"hey pleese heal me… i'm dying i will really
This book is an absolute masterpiece! Every chapter is packed with suspense, and the plot twists are mind-blowing. The characters are so real, and the story kept me on the edge of my seat. The author's ability to control emotions is sheer genius. I couldn't put it down—it's more than a five-star read!
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