Beautiful, well done, amazing, its honestly one of the best novels ive written and theres only like 9 chapters!! cant wait for moreee!!!!!!!!
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Please continue this book when ever possible so far this is the only book I have found where the mc is a true robot mech I hope you find more inspiration for this book
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This is a transmigration story like others before where the MC takes over a body and has a knowledgeable spirit master to help guide him to cultivate. The interesting and enjoyable part of this story for me is where the MC takes a backseat and is more like an observer as the plot unfolds around him. The author does an excellent job of highlighting characters around the MC and provide very reasonable points of views for all the characters, even the villains. There are no young master drama, face slapping or unnecessary killing.SPOILER: I completed reading the raws for this story. After the wonderful first volume/arc, the story tanks for me. It becomes a harem focused, women chasing drama with all beauties (15+ ish) falling for the MC as he explore the world and gets involve with their dramas. The MC even gets his master, his personal disciple and her aunt, his not blood related sister and her master, etc... you get the point. The author admits at the end of the story that he made the change due to low subscriptions from the first arc and doubled the subscriptions after focusing on the harem, which is too bad because this could have been a unique and interesting story.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I have never heard of a book like this before! This teenage girl is so dedicated to her foster brothers and sisters that she's willing to do anything for them to make sure that they have everything that they need, and she's just a kid herself. She's finally found a guy who seems to recognize how special she is, but will they make it work? I keep reading chapters to find out. Can't wait for more to be released!
I first read this a year ago on R*y*lRo*d, and it hasn’t been updated in the last 50 days. If the author is genuine then this is a good read, otherwise I can’t really enjoy “Copy and Paste” work.
An extremely fun synopsis and premise for a story. Dialogue, grammar, and syntax is excellent. Likeable characters, with a story that immediately hooks you in. Please keep writing.
Dropping at chapter 70Poor grammarBadly written characters (male lead is an annoying ungrateful 4ss while female is just a mindless maiden in love)Story is ok but can make you roll your eyesAll in all, decent for an '******* writter', good luck!