Spankmaster
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
A story I could binge for if author would be so kind as to post more. Our mc is a devil on the outside but an angel on the inside, yet she isn’t naively innocent to the point it is annoying. She has her own character that bursts out of the screen and the intellect to carry her through danger.
Everything is nigh perfect except for a repeating grammar issue.
Grammar errors are in everyone’s books, but I’ve noticed you replaced commas or periods with ellipses in dialogues and sometimes in paragraphs, which is not so good in the long run. Would suggest to correct at least some since it does bother me a bit.
All in all, splendid potential that makes me crave for more. Keep up the good work, Author !
Whenever the MC makes a choice between two decisions, strangely I can't read them. Thank you to those who commented what they were supposed to say in the comments for those who couldn't read them. If you're wondering what I'm talking about, just read and you'll find out. Or hopefully, they'll have fixed that the time you read this review.MC rerolls his cultivation potential until he gets top notch potential. He then joins a sect, goes on the down low and occasionally does a few high profile things while still trying to be low-key. Some people have also commented that he's stupid sometimes, but so what? Does the MC have to be perfect to enjoy the story?The novel isn't bad. The MC uses a sword, so if you have some strange prejudice against swords (this has barely any impact on the plot anyway), you can skip it. Otherwise, if you really can't find anything better, this novel is fine to read until the very end.
wth HOW on earth did this trash get high ranking's like these, THE GIRL that slapped him and threw him out of the company is the girl he decided to live in shelter with and is gonna help her bro... and he is a fricken simp DUDE this is just stupid, gave a 2 cuz i like the apocalypse concept more specifically Zombie's too bad tho :((
I hate Jesse. How could he do that to Renee? Renee is a strong woman, even with all the hardship she going through, she keep going forward for her child. I cannot imagine if this sort of thing happened to me. Great job author in producing such a masterpiece. I just read up to ten chapter.
I really like the story but I wish they will hurry up and update it it's been out for a while and it hasn't been updated since chapter 40 I don't know how much longer it's going to be till they updated I hope it's going to be soon
Like New Age of Summoners not much is wrong with the book... The book upadate and the story progress is very constant... Just that the book is nothing spectacular it hovers around the above average category... One of those books to read when there is nothing to read and you have sometime to kill...
This is absolutely the dumbest thing i have ever read in my life I don't understabd how this idiot of an mc has figured out his maids arent normal yet especially when he was making the perfume dumb mc trash translation everything is terrible
The whole story is good. So many timeskips and the X-Virus is kinda similar to COVID-19. I didn't expect your chapters to have so many "—
Nice story. I like it's development very much.The MC is also smart and intelligent. The background is also nice.What I like the most is the story's plot.Keep it up
I’m a sucker for beast taming stories. I usually enjoy them regardless of quality. So, have I enjoyed this story so far? Yes. Is the story actually good? Uhh, not really…The premise of the story is somewhat interesting. The MC can tell stories from his past life to level up beasts. Then they contract with him out of gratitude. The problem is this feels like it was written by a middle schooler. The language and descriptions are very simple. There have been plenty of fights, but none of them have been interesting. The author doesn’t know how to write fight scenes and I’m not sure he’s even trying. It’s just Giles yelling out commands and then a short description of him winning for pretty much every battle. None of the characters have much personality and the MC is incredibly bland, so it’s hard to get invested in any of them. All in all, there’s nothing of much interest in this story. I can only recommend it to people like me who are willing to read anything regarding beast taming.
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