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Very original and different. For once not the same stale stories rehashed for the n'th time. Its a good mix between comedy slice of life like story with some more serious touches. It has a good bit of an OP main character while not making it boring. On top of that, its one if the few novels that not only get the feeling of a game environment right (and not make me feel like the author cant count to 10 or never played an MMO) but also doesnt treat its readers like 5 year olds and gives me 5 paragraphs explaining why 10+10 is supposed to be 20. It doesnt take an IT genius to read this, but it is also not dumbed down to a level that removes all depths of the games mechanics and possibilities. In my opinion this is one of the very few novel gems on the platform. Can only highly recommend it.

Don't know why I like It, I just do. ‎‎‎‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

Seized by the System is a story about Fang Ning who has been possessed by a system after commenting on a website about a meteor.

This novel has a interesting idea, but thats about it. While the idea is interesting, I don't see how you can make it work in a novel. Everything feels rather pointless.

First off, the translation quality is decent. There isn't any obvious mistakes either, and compared to most translation novels this is already pretty good. Writing quality in general is average thought. (4/5 stars)

Story development. This a comedy novel, meaning the story is rather lackluster. The only point of focus in this novel is the comedy, everything else is completely disregarded. The pacing is rather awful, there are random time skips really early on. The system fights for justice "just because". The power scaling is rather bad as well, I mean, they literally don't tell you anything. This is a "cultivation" novel, and we don't even know the main character's strength. Aside from that, the story is completely lackluster. It's extremely dull. (1/5 stars)

The character design is disregarded as well. We have the main character, a procrastinator. This doesn't change. We also have a stupid system, this doesn't change. There are also plenty of women who are thirsting for the main character, but this doesn't matter as theres no romance. All other side characters are rather stupid as well, and this seems to be a running theme in Chinese comedy. (1/5 stars)

World background is somewhat interesting. It's rather vague, but that might because I haven't read terribly far into the story. It's a world where various people have awakened super powers, and this ranges widely from super speed to cultivation masters. (3/5 stars)

Overall, the story's premise was rather limited from the start, and as usual with most Chinese comedies, story development and character design are forgotten. I give this novel 2.8 stars out of 5.

Yeah its a okay book but personally I don't enjoy these type of story. Its like handa kun type misunderstanding. Some will enjoy so go ahead

You did a good job making mc a villain. The events were fun but the problem is with a lot of information and superpowers that you quickly give him, this leads to confusion for the viewer as it is difficult to keep track of these many abilities, mc is acting a bit reckless towards people stronger than him, on the whole the most thing  sexy is mc character good luck

Let me have the honor of the first review for this awesome new book.First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far...The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop.It's not really cringe and edgy either and istolerable enough to read.Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past.Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)

the story seemed interesting but the auhor stupidity runied it. i mean there is no logical sense in any actions the MC does. Do you ever see a 4 year old wandering around alone? He takes taxi? No matter how good a society is, this is not posible and these little things ruined the story for me.

Gotta love the beast tamer stories. Worth checking out

Shameless 5 star author review!!!!!  Glad you were able to stop by and take a look at this book! I take my inspiration from the Legendary Mechanic and The Strongest Sword God.  Both of these books kept me up all night for weeks on end and now I'm getting revenge by making a book that will do the same!!!! Muahahaha.Seriously though, expect intense action and world building on two ends, both I. Socrathia and on Earth.  Our MC may have the knowledge of the future but that's not going to make things easy for him.I will do my best to add the reviewers and commentators thoughts into the book, and let's explore this VRMMORPG and post apocalyptic world together!!!!

If you are here for an Itachi adventure in ATG, you may be disappointed. His characterisation here is so far removed from the original, it's hard to see him as Itachi.
If you are here for Yun Che with sharingaan, you may find it refreshing.

I'm in the first camp so I've gone as far as I can with it.

Good ff, keep it up