Spankmaster
Love reading your novel.?Looking forward to know more about the story. Loves the interaction between the characters.Recommend other to read it. Give it a try???
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ahhhh I really fell in love with this novel.
keep it up
19 chapters in and I absolute love this novel. Nice idea with his nurture ability and hope to see more of you multiverse. Writing quality is also perfect like GE and PD. Hope to see more of this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update]
volume one is about gangs and stuff. i didn't like it, but then, i just pushed myself to read and hoped that the grammar and story would be better. after volume one, which is the two, it started to show about the apocalypse stuff. so far, the story is just starting even though the chapters were long. it is starting to become amazing. i hope to read more.
I wish to slam my head into a wall after reading this amazingly perfect piece of trash, it has more holes than a sponge and more idiocy and hypocrisy as well as entitlement than anything else ive seen in all my nine lives
The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good.
We're no strangers to love
You know the rules and so do I
A full commitment's what I'm thinking of
You wouldn't get this from any other guy
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
And if you ask me how I'm feeling
Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up)
We've known each other for so long
Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it
Inside, we both know what's been going on
We know the game and we're gonna play it
I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling
Gotta make you understand
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
I believe there is a problem in the translations for this novel. The grammer and sentence structure can be confusing.
I could not make it past a few chapter before giving up. I tried looking ahead and it didn't seem to get better.
Good book. Easy read, the story picks up right from the beginning. The main character Carter seems like an interesting person but he needs much more developing. Overall, it's quite a decent book, highly recommended. Kudos to the author.
just a good book overall if you can get though the grammar and spelling that they have but other then that it's a well written book
The story rushes past many things and descriptions, but I still loved it. It's definitely a feel good novel. Some fairly strong plot-armor, though.
At first it was interesting, mc having the highest cultivation level in his plane/realm all to know that he have no combat experience at all which sucks.
The plot is boring with alot of flaws.
