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We need him to start becoming more dominant please stop making him a cuck person because it basically needs to be solved and is getting tiresome so just make him,find his sister and mom and ignore other people this sounds better and more reasonable than continuing this feeding his rage path because he get betrayed just make him badass that's all okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
A very fun and enjoyable read. It's a very unique take on reincarnation that I havent seen before. I wont say much to avoid spoilers, but I can guarentee u that u will love the story. The grammer is fine, character development is great and I have to yet find a boring chapter.
What i can say is that the mc is a scumbag when it comes to romance. He knows both girls like him. He treats them both more than a friend with a smile. Now it comes to the point the he has to pick one. Picks the one who's useless, who used his power to save her ass family, because theyve been together much longer than the other woman. The other helps him, even risking conflict with much stronger family, always there when he has a problem, smart, beautiful, rich, talented lady, gets rejected.
Scumbag cause he do what he wants, making the lady have hopes, even though in the beginning he already choose the other girl in his mind, he should've already stayed away, because as time goes the lady fell to him deeper.
Fuccking scumbag, he could've prevented hurting her if he wasn't so arrogant doing whatever he wants, but just because he found it troubling, boom, 'i dont want you anymore'.
What is with always picking the poor, helpless girl, compared to a rich, but always there to help you?
So far a very good novel. The main character is not stupid or narcissistic thinking he can do it all himself. He understands that if things are gonna go better this time around then he will have to work with others. Side characters are actually interesting and are more to them than just a plot point. Writing is very good. Compaired to some of the other works im used to its kinda weird reading something that i dont have to auto correct what i read.
Don't let the poor ratings fool you. A bunch of people are made about a single sentence that is vaguely racist (which was removed) and are judging the whole novel based on that. So far this criticism is completely at odds with the rest of the novel's contents.
This is a fun, wholesome novel similar to other beast cultivation novels and I recommend giving it a try.
This is straight trash, tried so hard to be funny but you failed so bad author dumb. Boring fight, the fight is ridiculously stupid. Idk what the author trying to do, he needs to stop.
I absolutely love IT! I finally found a story with ruthless and merciless ML and I will be damned if I won't read it whole! So keep writing pls!! I can't wait for another update! <3
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I guarantee Webnovel will put this trash novel in the voting section for release. Whichever novel with the most soulstones used will be selected as editor choice? Yeah fucking right. They do a process where they release 8 books and then take away the novels that are highly rated since they don't want to put too many high quality books up at once. They want to maximize profit by milking money of trash novels and a few good ones. Only when 1 highly rated novel is done, will they put another out.
Hi! This is the author here~ So, I hope you are all enjoying the novel I am writing here, and please do give me a review (you can criticise) so that I know what I should improve upon! Thanks to those who have already given me a review!
Anyways, I will try to keep a consistent update but with university studies, health and other matters, I might be delayed or put on hiatus during tests or exams (sorry (ಥ﹏ಥ)!).
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I liked the ideal even though the author doesn't really seem to understand the Cardcaptor series that much. I read up to chapter 26 before I just couldn't do any more. The mc is so cowardly, that courage the cowardly dog has a bigger back bone then him. Sakura from Cardcaptor even has him beat. The pacing and lack of any real action starts to give you an headache. The first like 9 chapters are about the mc running and crying while get chase by a zombie. Honestly this novel pretty feels like a joke story, because most of the writing is about a lame joke of some kind. I'm being quite literal with that statement. There no real seriousness in the story that makes you like it. Long story short it's a joke parody of many animes/mangas, but without being good.
