Review after thoroughly reading the first four chapters btw won't spoil anything so don't worry :) (not memeing or anything gonna be real)
first: lucan is going to make river of blood flow (obv the blood will be of his enemies)
second: potential lover is a beauty unlike none has seen before (everyone's little brother whistles)
third: the setting is insane (just like all the other mlb novels :D)
fourth: from the name I can just guess that hero's are in for it (hopefully crazy killing happens lol)
well that's it go vote
one of the best pet novel in webnovel... actually I started to hate pet novel genre because huge quantities bad copy paste pet novel released by webnovel.after reading some good reviews I tried this one for just trying..after reading I can say it's not a gem...but definitely good read until last chapter I read. must try...
I was kinda hoping this would get a remake on this story, your other 2 books are so good. good luck ........................................
Why is this novel in the Voting section i don't understand. This novel is too Fast Paced, i really don't understand the world background. It is not clear enough in 40+ chapters.
MC is getting power up everyother chapter without doing anything major but others are doing the same thing with a slower pace but still they don't get the power up that MC got. Its like the whole Game is made for the MC others are nothing. World Background is too vague which confuses me several times.
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This is one of the best novels (I’ve only read up to chapter twenty) that Webnovel has released so far.
It’s a traditional Xianxia transmigration story. Its very well written.
Why is face-slapping tag a thing? Isn't that just filler? Do people enjoy that?
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So this is a prequel from "the portal of wonderland" and shared universe with "a record of Mortal's Journey To Immortality".................
I was never really into sci Fi till I started this book. it's detailed and the author is doing a really good job .I'll recommend this to y'all sci Fi lovers
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
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Started reading yesterday and have caught up as of just a few minutes ago. I had been searching for a kingdom-building novel for some time now and this really scratches that itch.
The characters Jun meets feel genuine and fleshed out, the dynamics/feelings between them seem realistic. The worldbuilding is also quite detailed and the video game elements give it a nice spin opposed to a regular apocalypse novel. The writing is decent and stays consistent throughout the chapters I've read, slight improvements have been noted but there's still some grammar mistakes here and there but one easily reads past those, it's not annoying enough for me to call it a flaw. And I'm sure that the Author over the time of writing this novel will slowly improve his style.
All in all I love the novel so far and have enjoyed every minute of reading it, keep on trucking Author and I hope this gets the attention it deserves.
** if you're in need of reviews maybe swap some with other writers on the Webnovel forums, that could also give you an insight into what other writers think could improve or what you do really well.
Thanks for writing Author! (っ˘з(˘⌣˘ )