where are you author? ??? please comeback
wish it was a harem , sad degenerate noises
Instant 5* can't believe I came upon this gem when I'm on my way to FL novels. Mc is selfish but caring toward his loved ones.If you are tired of harem novels (like I am) this novel is for you. The romance is progress very quickly so you don't need to wait 100+ chapters, best thing in this novel is that they also show side character relationships (I know some harem novels have that too but they always end up being overshadowed by Mc and his harem).Ps:I'm bad at reviews, anyway xD do your best author!! I absolutely love this novel and I hope you will continue until the very end (I'll be here with you ?)
Interesting characters. Great plots, love the twists and turns.
Right at the start, you are captured by the I justices of this new world. The author knows just how to bring you in to the plot and make your ant to see the underdog rise. Fight and push forward with our loveable MC, you won’t regret watching him become a complete bad**s ! Definitely worth the read. Just remember to bug the author for more chapters or else you’ll binge it all.
The novel’s writing and background were good, but it was quite boring as the mc didnt meet any other players for a long time. However if you’re fine with the mc basically being alone for 50+ chaps, it’s pretty good.
Worth a read..... if the plot is executed decently.... .let's hope its selected... !!!!?..................................................golden finger
It is only five chapters and I hope your Webnovel will grow, for the first chapters already made me noticed how complicated and how sci-fi this Webnovel is.By the way, the System looks legit as a Magic ability since the System concept has always been around to a magic character.
The story has a cool premise and the system seems unique as well. The author seems to have done a lot of research regarding guns and the like, so good job, author!
One thing I have to say though is that the story needs some proofreading and some extra details. The plot seems to go a bit too fast; it would be better if it was slowed down a bit.
Good luck author! :)
Well, I'm not good at giving reviews. How the author wrote the story was good even there are some mistakes but it still provided sufficient information to visualize the story. The story is very interesting :)
I think your writing is pretty good, just a couple of complaints and that is in the translation, confusing genders. I may suggest that you get an editor to assist you. I am at chapter 12 and the story line is very good. I sincerely hope you do not decide to drop the story.
First 2 chapters seemed like a really funny parody of SAO and it IS that too, but it’s so much more! This is a really good book and you should give it a chance!