Hello，
This is Avarohm Leslie, a representative editor from another platform which focuses on adventurous and high concept genres. I really think your story is intriguing with unique appeal to readers. Sincerely hope that we can have a chance to discuss further cooperation with you. If you are interested, please reach out to me at [email protected]. Looking forward to introduce more to you. Thanks.
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's not a bad story, but sadly not for me, the plot twist at the end of the first vol was good, but I don't like those type of characters. then again that's taste not quality.
After chapter 16 this book completely turned into trash, its not even worth spending your coins on this. He reveals his powers to the public like its nothing, and there is absolutely no world building. First thought this was a modern world but the they talk about the profession of a mage and then the mc threatens other people saying he will kill them. Then they act super suprised by the fact that he can use magic. At this point the government and the police force is an absolute joke. This story did show potential but not anymore. Also the authors math is trash and he literally says someone that is a different race is a "mixed-blood" like tf?
This thing is one of the olden classics, part of the beginning of us novel weebs. Therefore, i would like to thank this novel for being with us throughout that period of time. Secondly, too many timeskips.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels! + Get Hardcover PublishHey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing contest! This contest is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi, but if you haven’t worked on these genres, that’s TOTALLY FINE! You can refer to the given examples and tips to develop a new story. As all new stories can get cash rewards, this might be your chance to begin your writing career and start to make a living by writing! Not to mention that you can take your chance to win the big cash and get your books published in hardcover! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/3tBG7l7or contact [email protected]
it was really interesting?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
check this out guys✌️?✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅
Hey everyone.
This will be a detailed review, in hopes that it would give you the push to read the novel.
Written at ch. 110
--------
As a reader of the author's previous and first novel, Tale of the Void Emperor, I have to say, I am very impressed. The author's first novel is very unique in its own sense, however, it had mistakes in the beginning due to being author's first novel, later on, you would rarely see such mistakes.
I took too long saying unnecessary things, but for me, I hsd to say those things because this novel actually has, in my humble opinion, more potential than the previous one.
The idea is very unique, the power system is very well-written, not only that, but the writing style from chapter 1 to latest is very consistent with little to no mistakes at all.
The MC, Aren, is a normal human being, not someone with future memories or anything, he's someone who has a goal of overcoming the disaster so that he would be able to live peacefully. He's not lame, he's smart, calculative, and above all, has a clear goal in his mind.
As for the world building and side characters, author did a pretty good job, he didn't do any info dumping, but introduced everything once it appeared, explaining it in a way that wouldn't bore the reader. The side characters are given their own time to grow not like other novels where MC meets friends and they are thrown in the background and forgotten. There aren't a lot of them introduced right now since (Spoiler)...
Author is currently updating at a rate of 1/day, however, he's planning to increase that soon.
Finally, the novel isn't filled with a lot of fillers, other than first 10 or 20 chapters since author had to do some world building.
------
Anyways, this is it for my review, hope I didn't take long.
More chapters incoming so plzzzzzz wite patiently kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk(kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
These constant errors are so annoying. I couldn't even read anymore, had to close it after the first chapter. Please find an editor to proofread before you post.
I love the story until chapter 113 after MC become to so much heartless didn't give second chance to many Character, but the want that i can't not forgive is Ariel dead.
she was have much story that can be explored in her background, and have good skill on Fire magic and Flight, at first i feel interested on her first appearance and have many hint that she will become hans allies or become his woman but... the author just kill the Character just like that
i don't really mind if MC kill Veena (Underground boss) because she was evil but, not for this Ariel girl... she not evil like veena
already lost my mood to continue this novel, even do if continue to reading i can't bear how many times he will killed many potential Harem?