John_Ciner
nice
Don't know whether it is translation mistakes or story which made me discontinue reading this book.
Hope to see better work...
Some small treasure for all Femboy fans.
I want to give this a good score, but i just can't since everything is just copied from the version on wuxiaworld.
Although this one has more chapters at first look, the chapters here are just smaller and some cut into pieces. If you want to read this please go to wuxiaworld and read it there and support the real translator and not some kind of copy paster.
Its very good. The characters are very vivid...The flow of story is very interesting. Anyway, I like it <3
Unlike your first book this mc is really not great.
Naive
Stupid
prideful
The story is interesting but very slow.
The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time.
The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.
I like the novel, but the language I speak is Spanish, so I wanted to pay for Webnovel to continue with the story, but I can't translate it into Spanish. It's a shame, I really wanted to read the story. Don't you have a Patreon?"
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this very good story....i like this concept....genius and just solo can pentakill...hahaha...i hope you dont give up this novel....because this novel very very good....thank you
A very nice book with agile start up. The beginning got me to read down the interesting drain. The author, at first, was very realistic in narration, that's what I love most.
I like the characters and I think the story flows well. I don't think think the post apocalyptic scenario is believable in this setting. So humanity just kept fighting until only a few a hundred million people were left? We didn't stop at a quarter of the world population, or at half. It wouldn't take anywhere near that for all the governments to shut down and create chaos. Anyway I dwelt on the one point too long. There is a lot of wit in your writing. I'll definitely keep reading.
