Good start i think you should work more in the character and the length of the novel.
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I have read the first 60 trial read chapters, and inhave to admit the novel has great promise and have the potential to become a top novel.
♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★This Saiyan ...*cough*... this Lord wanted to claim first but was late, so imma gonna read first before "reviewing" again. ♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★♡★
like another review I saw on this book this description did to give me a ****ing Stroke............................................. hopefully it's good
I would place this novel with some high ranking story, based on potential; the characters aren't cutouts. They make rational and irrational decisions that fit their personality.
I'm not able to guess the plot or what will
happen next
Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is
progressing with little predictable that is a familiar turn off for the system-oriented genre
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Absolutely loved this book from start to finish. I live in the same area this book is based so it was fascinating and exciting to hear places referred to that I could actually picture in my mind's eye. The character development was cleaver and enjoyable. A genuine page turner!!! Looking forward to the next piece of work from the author.
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Yep. Its good. It has decent start, intriguing characters, and the first dialogue in the prologue just blew me off by an instant. This book's got potential.