well, story development is a bit rushed like he just completes one event disaster and new disasters are in line for him to solve. well, atleast like some other novels, mc doesn't behaves naive and doesn't bring trouble to himself that's a good thing. world background is good but it seems like everybody is only focusing on him too much. well enjoyed it. keep up.
Some romance later on by any chance author???................................................................................................
first 50 chapters could have ended within 10 chapters but clearly the author aint writing this for the story but for the money, very short chapter prolonged situations.
It didn't take long for this to become tedious. MC has what is effectively a "sign-in" system, except instead of just getting stuff he fights a fish with a difficulty rating system that he ignores and a reward system that makes him problematically OP within the first dozen chapters. There's a lot of cringe desperately trying to pass as cool; it's basically an interesting premise with some potential, ruined by execution.
The start of the story is quite interesting.
This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way.
i just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.
Stability of updates 5/5 I get one chapter at the same hour every day. Very good novel, although there are some grammar mistakes here and there, it doesn't ruin the story. Keep up the good work.
I have seen a lot of review that complained about the first "chapter" and the fact that this novel was released without being "voted". So I decided to address those things, from a fan to another.
The first chapter was some kind of preview, I won't deny that I was confused myself but I recommend that we keep a open mind about those things. As for the fact that it was released out of nowhere it is because it was just released in China.
...i personally am very excited and hopeful for this novel, I love the autor and the translator is a good one, so I hope that people give it a chance and don't judge it for it's beginning, and let's not forget that this autor is know for ****** a slow story but with great development and characters.
I warmly recommend this novel. It is very refreshing and original.
Translation Quality:
Overall, I have been satisfied by the language quality. English is fine.
However, assessing this particular aspect is always hard since I don't understand Chinese and i'm not a professional translator (Translation is a very peculiar exercice and requires dedication). English is not my mother tongue either.
Update Stability:
The team has usually kept the daily schedule. Moreover, the author has not published much more chapters so there is no point in expecting a quicker pace for the updates.
Story development:
The novel is one of a kind on this website. By any means, it is a Xanxia novel. Yet, the writer gives a mysterious, otherworldly mood to his story and to the characters. For once, we feel that pursuing immortality is a journey for the protagonist, that he becomes something different than the "common folk" ("similar" to the Selbstüberwindung from Nietzche perhaps).
Character Design:
Very satisfied. The focus is on Jing Jiu but the other characters are given enough attention to feel real. Relationships and backgrounds are rich.
World Building:
The world feels coherent and real: a well done typical Xanxia (Martial Sects, etc.) with a complex background, which is being developed along the story (Nothing has been dumped violently).
Furthermore, the story has not fallen in this unpleasant cliché: this continent is a small backward island, there are skies beyond skies, etc.
Website : qidian china
Views : 5.86 million
Rating : 7.4(976)
Chapters : 512
Status : ongoing
rank : 19
Word count : 1.60 million
author rank : platinum
MC goes full retard. You never go full retard, but the MC did. Dropped at chapter 159. More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words More Words
Honestly, no offense author but your mc sounds like grandma.
A superb read! Double thumbs up. Highly recommended and I promise you, when you check this novel out, you'll want more chapters. :)) So, join me and read!