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This was not as funny as I expected but the story is very engaging. I really like the main character Dexter. I am looking forward to see the character development of the character.
Let's see how it progresses I am really waiting for the upcoming chapters. And wish author goodluck for writting such an amazing story.
Nice work till now. The author needs to give more updates.
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An good start and I like that the story is slow during the world building. The characters are interessting and can't wait for more chaoters.
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Pls translate more th other one isn’t bad but it gets unreadable after chap like 20. …….. . . . .. … . . . . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . ....
Why bother with cultivating? just write: [The boy was Secretly the All-Knowing, All-Seeing God; Creator of all Things]The End.. or even just write your cultivation level to max level..
i love reading about royals , dragons , and divine powers. this novel suit well my taste and i love the pace.i really cant wait for the mc to grow into young adults ?
This novel is below average and fast paced one, but still understandable also the mc is looking for his ex not knowing he already got c*ck im also confuse why the author make the mc care for her only to get r*p*d in the next dozens chapters
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the story is nice but it seems to jump in places, causing the story to seem choppy.
and what are even the dolls
and if you explain the purpose of events it might help it flow easier
Okay! I read through the work. It was an amazing job you did there. Just the first and second chapters gripped me harder than I had previously imagined. Nice storyline and satisfying pace. Great one...